Error Analysis Rubric For Summer Interns Of Modlingua 2018 Version 1 Draft version   Version 2 -Corrected Version  Comments/Types of errors I have 5-7 years of French learning behind me and have obtained an A1 DELF degree 7 years of French learning with me. Being precise. The exact number has been mentioned instead of an approximation. I play the synthesizer too and have performed during various cultural events. And have been given the opportunity to perform at various cultural events. Better sentence construction for added clarity. Ability to take risk and initiatives. I presently know English, Hindi, French, Bengali and Portuguese basics. Risks and initiatives. Have a common over English, Hindi, French, Bengali and Portuguese Plurals. Addition of commas and spaces between the languages. A revelation of a new culture. Multilingual in the process of assimilating into other cultures. Revelation, Multilinguals Wrong vocabulary.Plural forms of the words As for me, language learning is an ever-growing asset in the current scenario.  Learning a new language/ "language learning" Better sentence construction and choice of language. spacing required I will explain this with my own personal experience Deleted Reference not required. 'Hindi' and, 'English' Hindi and English Multilingual can see their own culture from a new perspective and are able to compare, contrast cultures. Multilinguals plurality of the noun. Being an undergraduate student but with a considerable knowledge of the subject am currently teaching a 6yr old UK based girl French. Being an undergraduate student but with a considerable knowledge of the subject, I am currently teaching a 6 yr old UK based girl French. An absence of a subject. Improved sentence construction. Comma needed after the subject. I had been given the opportunity to attend presidential summit during the visit of Emmanuel Macron. I was given the opportunity to attend a/the presidential summit. Change in sentence construction and tenses. Full enthusiasm and utmost dedication and fulfil my responsibilities. Fulfill my responsibilities spelling error.   Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text Total Number of Target Text Error related to articles 0 Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces 2 Omissions 2 Spelling Errors 0 Choice of words  1 Factual errors 0 Choice of words and overall consistency of those words, 1 An eye for details lacked attention for details. Page layout and overall presentation missing Profile Photo Quality Not applicable here Additional Comments if any Sentence construction has been made and certain alterations were done in order to sound more coherent and logical. Time taken to correct 30mins Time taken to prepare this evaluation report 15mins

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