Error Analysis
Total Number of Source Text:259
Total Number of Source Text:259
| Errors related to articles | 0 |
| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces | 0 |
| Omissions | 0 |
| Spelling errors | 1 |
| Choice of words | 2 |
| Factual errors | 1 |
| Choice of words and over all consistency of those words | 2 |
| An eye for details | Attention for details |
| Profile Photo Quality | Not applicable here |
| Additional comments if any | Apart from above errors, lots of improvement in the sentence structure was done in order to bring more clarity and coherence |
| Time taken to correct 259 words | 20 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report | 20 Minutes |
| Draft version | Corrected version | Types of errors |
| I earned my Bachelor’s degree in Oriental languages from the faculty of arts, Cairo University. | Deleted | Not needed |
| I studied literature and languages of Persian and Turkish | Deleted | Not needed |
| Translation is one of my favourite passions especially in media, research and scientific fields, so I joined in Scientific Research program with Egypt Scholars Inc to learning about it and improve my skills. | Translation is one of my favorite passions especially in media, research and scientific fields, so I joined in Scientific Research program with Egypt Scholars Inc to learning about it and improve my skills. | Check the spelling of favorite |
| Also, I am a scientific translator in Real Science online Magazine, where I translate many articles in different fields such as psychology, Sociology, Biology and Linguistics from English to Arabic. | Also, I am a scientific translator in Real Science online Magazine, which I translate many articles in different fields such as psychology, Sociology, Biology and Linguistics from English to Arabic. | Check the choice of word which |
| Also, I volunteer in "Her Story" campaign, which sponsored by Wikipedia and the United Nations Women by translating from English to Arabic. | Deleted | Not needed |
| I am interested also in media. I joined a "What is news" certificate online course from Michigan State University to learning how to create and make good news and how to deliver it to the right audience. | I interested also in media. I joined a "What is news" certificate online course from Michigan State University to learning how to create and make good news and how to deliver it to the right audience. | Improvement sentence syntax delete verb "am" |
| I am a self-motivated person and believe that everyone should develop new skill | Deleted | Not needed |
| For me, every new language you learn means that you become a new person with a different perspective. | Deleted | Not needed |
| Each new language means new countries you can go to, and means more job opportunities you can get. | Deleted | Not needed |
| And a lot of closed doors, which were impossible for you to enter, become opened for you. | Deleted | Not needed |
| My dream is to work in a dynamic environment where people from different nationalities to enrich my skill. | My dream is working in a dynamic environment where people from different nationalities to enrich my skill. | Improvement sentence syntax |
| I know Persian (oral and written), English, Turkish (basic written) and Arabic. | Deleted | Not needed |
