By Clara Carybé
The One-Liner
Translator’s invisibility and a good translation in a debate.
The Background
The man behind a theory. He is Lawrence Venuti. He was born in Philadelphia. Venuti graduated from Temple University. He has long lived in New York City. In 1980 he completed the Ph.D. in English at Columbia University.
Venuti is currently professor of English at Temple University and works in early modern literature, anglophone and foreign-language poetic traditions, translation theory and history, adaptation studies, and literary translation. He translates from Italian, French, and Catalan.
His translation projects have won awards from the PEN American Center (1980), the National Endowment for the Arts (1983, 1999), the National Endowment for the Humanities (1989), and the Guggenheim Foundation (2007). In 1999 he held a Fulbright Senior Lectureship in translation studies at the Universitat de Vic (Spain). In 2008 his version of Catalan writer Ernest Farrés’s book of poems, Edward Hopper, received the Robert Fagles Translation Prize.
The Premise
Lawrence Venuti is the scholar who first spoke of the translator’s invisibility concept. The more the translators strive to provide a good translation the more devalued becomes their work and more invisible they are. The translators see their translation devalued because their work and effort in translating is not perceived. In order not ensure that their translation disappears, the translators manipulate the target language, and it causes the reader to view the translated text as a work originally written in that target language. To do so, they use artifices that bring the translation near to the reader’s culture. This choice results in the transparency effect, a phenomenon that erases all the effort undertaken in a translation. It leaves the text with fluidity and easily comprehensible as if it were written in the target language causing the impression that the translation is the author’s very text and that the translated text was the original one. To achieve transparency, the translators manipulate the original text. They do so by using the current syntax and the vocabulary near to the reader’s culture. In a certain way, manipulating the results.
The concepts of manipulation and effect transparencies came into front because they discussed the concept of good translation. For some theorists, a good translation is one that does not have any linguistic or stylistic peculiarity that causes estrangement to the reader. The text translated in this way becomes transparent as if reflecting the personality and intent of the writer of the original.
The nemeses in our story
The translators are their nemeses.
The effort to achieve a good translation redounds in the translator’s invisibility. Ironically, the greater the translator's work to give fluidity to the text smaller the estrangement from the reader greater invisibility of the professional.
Invisibility as self-destruction.
The invisibility of the translator affects the copyright law because as long as the translators disappear, it is not necessary to pay them for their work and weakens the contract negotiations. The translator’s invisibility also brings to light the discussion about the domestication of the texts. To achieve a smooth and transparent discourse, texts that are more easily translatable are selected, and the foreign culture is devalued since it almost disappears, and the reader is not aware of the peculiarities of other peoples. The invisibility decreases the importance of the translator, and it leads to the translation’s economic exploitation.
It is important to mention that this discussion around the translator’s invisibility is restricted to literature. It is in this field that the translator theoretically has more independence to decide which strategy of translation to use. Theoretically because in reality the translator is compelled to one or other strategy depending on external factors as well such as the editor’s opinion of what is the best strategy to sell.
The hero and the twist
Our hero and nemeses are the same. Our twist is that the same professional that causes the problem is the same one to have the remedy for it. The foreignization means preserving in the texts the peculiar marks to the culture of the source language.
The resolution
Lawrance Venuti proposes to our hero to combat these domestication woes and all its consequences with the foreignization of translations. The foreignization means preserving in the texts the peculiar marks to the culture of the source language. If the translators cease to be transparent, it is possible that their work gains importance in the translation industry and as a consequence, they can fight for better fees.
THE SCRIPT
Date: 29/09/2018
Client: Modllingua
Project: Interview with Lawrence Venuti
Video/SOT | Narration w/ Timecode | Graphics/Video & Timecode |
Modlingua Logo Animation | Caption A very important person |
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Images of Temple University campus | Hi. We are here to talk to the man behind “Translator’s invisibility concept. Let’s see who he is. | |
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Here we are with Lawrence Venuti. | Caption Lawrence Venuti |
Close up Interviewer |
Wrote a book called The Translator’s Invisibility: A History of Translation. This publication brought food for thought into the translation industry. Hello Professor. Thank you for this opportunity. |
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Interviewer | First of all, that you for this interview. Before the hard stuff, can you tell us who Lawrence Venuti is? What does he do when he is not teaching or thinking of a new theory? |
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Interviewer Close Up |
What’s a good translation in your opinion? | |
Interviewer Close Up |
I am going to show two videos, and I’d like you to give your opinion about them. | |
Video I | A character reads a text using the domestication strategy | |
Video II | A character reads the same text using the foreignization strategy | |
Interviewer |
Based on these two videos can you explain the concepts of domestication and foreignization? | |
Interviewer | How are these two strategies are related to the translator’s invisibility | |
Interviewer | Domestication is the only factor that leads to invisibility? What are the others? | |
Interviewer | What’s a good translation in your opinion? | |
Interviewer | What does the use of the When a translator domesticates a text being translated, what are the implications? | |
Interviewer | How about foreignizing? What are its effects in a translator | |
Interviewer | What a translator should think before applying these two strategies? | |
Interviewer | What’s a good translation in your opinion? | |
Interviewer | The translator’s invisibility is the translator’s choice? | |
Interviewer | Do you think that the translator’s invisibility is bad for the profession? | |
Interviewer | Can you tell us about the consumable concept and its implication to the translator’s invisibility? | |
Interviewer | Is the transparency of the translator a demand of the translator industry? | |
Interviewer | Why the translator’s invisibility is more evident in literary translation? | |
Interviewer | Can we say that the translator’s transparency weakens the importance of the translator? | |
Interviewer | Is there any implication to the copyright law? | |
Interviewer | Do domestication, foreignization, and translator’s invisibility are still valid concepts nowadays? | |
Interviewer | If you domesticate in this world of globalization, where everything is known, would it not be detrimental to the acceptation of a translation? | |
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What are now the theories in translation that apply to the translation industry with this wave of social media and translation machines? | |
Interviewer Close Up |
Thank you. I have a curiosity. People say that creativity is 20% inspiration and 80% hard work. What is your opinion about this? How does it apply to the translator’s invisibility concept? I mean, did it come to your mind as inspiration or hard work. | |
Interviewer | I’d like to thank Professor Lawrence Venuti for this interview. Thank you, Professor. |
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References
Lawrence Venuti/. (n.d.). Retrieved July 28, 2018, from http://www.cla.temple.edu/english/faculty/lawrence-venuti/