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I have keen interest in artificial intelligence, machine           I have a keen interest in artificial intelligence, machine             Improvement in syntax and sentence structure by 
learning, internet of things, mobile app designing and           learning, internet of things, mobile app designing and               including article
web development.                                                                    web development.

I was introduced to computer science when my schooling     I was introduced to computer science when my schooling        Improvement in syntax and sentence structure by  
or primary education began and hence have developed          or primary education began and hence have developed             including article 
grave interest in the subject over the years.                             a grave interest in the subject over the years.

I am a trained Odissi classical dancer, and I am                     I am a trained Odissi classical dancer, and I am                        Improvement in syntax and sentence structure.     associated with it since the last 13 years.                                associated with it for the last 13 years.                                      For used in place of since 

I have an eye for detail and try to give my best                      I have an eye for detail and try to give my best in every            Spelling of endeavour
in every endeavor.                                                                     endeavour.


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