THE PRESENT ANALYSIS AIMS TO CORRECT THE FOLLOWING AS PER TWO STANDARDS:

1] As per specific linguistic and non-linguistic aspects [structural-grammatical and componential-presential]
2] As per general and overall recommendations [from the following perspectives: client, student, intern, corporate and company, overall branding] 

 
A] BRIEF PROFESSIONAL PROFILE
 
“A person with a new idea is a crank until the idea succeeds.” – Mark Twain
 
I am all – a person, an idea, a crank, and a [directed] success. Psychology taught me All. Everything. And many more.
With an intent desire to pursue post graduation in Industrial Psychology from Europe, Didhiti translates difficulties as challenges, problems as a temporary compromise, worse as the flipside of better and yes, she also translates Spanish to English and vice versa.
She presently has a B2 level proficiency in Spanish and is looking up to make it a C2. She is a graphologist, a PSYCAP innovator, and is curious about logo designing. She researches what is apparent and unseen, what is worth investment and much more,  and what is “Blue Whale” and the “Facebook” aspect of the same, for which she stood out as one among the top three awarded in 2017 in a countrywide project at The National Institute of Mental Health and Neurosciences [Bangalore]. She has a brown belt in Karate from Sheishinkai Shito-Ryu Karate-Do Federation, affiliated to Sheishinkai International, Japan. She writes poems en passant and sketches portraits whenever time seems to be superfluous.
Her objective of joining Modlingua is to abilify her capacities as translator, psychologist, a future investor in human resources and optimizer of available psychological and physical capital towards better productivity.
 
 
B] CAREER GOALS
 
Opportunities come by, pause momentaneously and leave, perhaps yet to return again sometime in future. The apparent uncertainty of the latter, along with an express intent to demystify responsibility for myself, I choose to grab opportunities as soon as I perceive them heralding a good cause, worthy of respect. And that is a concrete reason for me to opt for a summer internship at Modlingua this year, 2018.
In a manner similar to how hindsight directs foresight, respecting the cyclic continuity of both the top-down and data-driven intellects, I cannot specify how I stand directed to my present, the same attributable to any definite event, if at all. All the while, it has been a continuity that has guided me ever since, and my decision to not give up psychologically in any moment of grave novelty. I call it “novelty” because the flip side of any apparent threat is a challenge and a puzzle yet to be solved.
My decision to choose to become a Psychology graduate was an alter-impact of understanding being, and not merely being the same. I took up projects as they came along, went to different states in India to participate in conferences, all the while partially gathering data on the essence of futility, or better mention, the negative impact of stagnation on work motivation. When stagflation ensues, people lose hope, encourage devalued drive, and thereby decrease output. It is important to me to be a part of the “reversal force” to this effect, thereby inculcating motility in society. And I think that a knowledge on market economy, social media research [one of the most powerful means to add motility in a long-range network], strong client-producer reciprocity and related aspects are valuable in my understanding of all the above aspects.
I have decided to study Industrial Psychology from Europe, which is an applicative branch of the discipline aimed at developing human resources and employee selection techniques, promoting ergonomics, improving industrial safety, health and policies to maximize profit with optimum investment and resource allocation. I am happy that my basic knowledge of economics [as an optional elective] helps me understand the rationale behind many of these infrastructures.
An evident problem with many start-up industries is that they seem negligent to the cause of the vector units, and invest more attention, energy and time to the produce in advance. The same is an adjunct to the desire of visualizing my country is the most prosperous in East Asia within the next 35 years, with me allocating no workup raw material to the same, in the form of positive psychological capital and physical labour. This is an evident paradox, and I want to make a change. My knowledge of market mobility, communication and logistics is a cognizant and projective missile to the doom of further waste of resource.
According to Avram Noam Chomsky’s Nativist Linguistic Perspective, metacognition, socialization and motive are basic to any interaction in sociolexicology. Sans further elaboration, I would like to mention that I have a B2 certification in my Spanish proficiency, which I acquired recently, and am eager to get a C2 level as soon as possible. My deep-rooted linguistic interest prompts me to expand it further, and I have decided to take up French next, with a few more in near future.  I hope to be able to integrate all these abilities into a productive whole with directive guidance from my present course at Modlingua.
 
 
 

 

ERROR ANALYSIS

• As per specific linguistic and non-linguistic aspects

• TOTAL NUMBER OF SOURCE TEXT: 800 WORDS
• TOTAL NUMBER OF TARGET TEXT: 764 WORDS
• ERRORS RELATED TO ARTICLES: 0
• ERRORS RELATED TO PUNCTUATION, SYMBOLS, SIGNS, SPACES: 0
• OMISSIONS: 0
• WORD STRUCTURE ERRORS: 0
• SYNTAX ERRORS: 0
• STRUCTURAL ERROR: 0
• SEGMENTATION ERRORS: 0
• SPELLING ERROR: 0
• CHOICE OF WORDS AND OVERALL CONSISTENCY ERRORS: 0
• FACTUAL ERRORS: 0
• MISCELLANEOUS ERRORS: 0
• ATTENTION TO DETAILS: SATISFACTORY
• PAGE LAYOUT AND OVERALL PRESENTATION: SATISFACTORY
• PROFILE PHOTO: NOT OF 250 x 250 DIMENSION AS PER THE RUBRIC

• As per general and overall recommendations

• CLIENT PERSPECTIVE ANALYSIS: There should be highlighted focus on this aspect, along with specification of business requirements from the target clientele position. Inclusion of major areas of work in a brief, to-the-point approach is missing, which might become more of an evasive business when hiring clients.
• STUDENT PERSPECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good focus exists on this aspect.
• INTERN PERSPECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good focus exists on this aspect.
• CORPORATE AND COMPANY PERSPECTIVE ANALYSIS: Should be strengthened with more descriptive and specific information about corporate and company goal enhancement ability of the subject, which includes knowledge and work experience, certifications and diplomas, to mention a few. Since Modlingua hosts a variety of major subtypes under its expanse, description of each of these areas in brief and ability to work them out are very important aspects. This will eventually tally with the company's need to hire the subject accordingly and thereby fix the pay scale.
• OVERALL BRANDING PERSPECTIVE ANALYSIS: Should be strengthened from both corporate-company and personal ability-worth perspectives. Some areas might overlap with the client and company perspectives, but they should be presented tactfully such as to evade redundancy, thereby making the presentation more attractive. A solid and focused description of the years of subjective experience and mastery are psychologically important security motives that attract the faith of target clients in expecting good quality assurance when the background contract is more of a traditional quality-analysis approach [TQAA] in a multicultural country like India.

GLOBAL EVALUATION
Although autobiographical focus is a crucial aspect in the present essay, the same will be more professionally impactful when combined with the client-company-branding trio in a more objective presentation such as to define its influence in Globalization, Internationalization, Localization, and Translation [GILT] perspectives and thereby conferring its dynamism in economic, societal and cultural expanses combined with mentioning of offshoring and outsourcing aspects.
 
Time required for correction of  800 words: 10 minutes
Time required for preparation of this evaluation: 45 minutes