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| Version 1- Draft version | Version 2- Corrected version | Comments/Type of errors |
| Afterward, with the willingness to learn more, I enrolled myself in Embassy/Cultural Center Of Spain: Instituto Cervantes (Connaught place), there I have gained and upgraded my skills in Spanish language with enormous amount of valuable insights and later effectively completed consecutive levels (A1, B1, B2) in the same. |
Afterwards, with the willingness to learn more, I enrolled myself in Embassy/Cultural Center Of Spain: Instituto Cervantes (Connaught place), there I have gained and upgraded my skills in Spanish language with enormous amount of valuable insights and later effectively completed consecutive levels (A1, B1, B2) in the same. | Spelling error |
| Nonetheless, if given a window of opportunity to such causes in future, I would leave no stone unturned to serve in whatever way possible. |
Nonetheless, if given a window of opportunity to such causes in the future, I would leave no stone unturned to serve in whatever way possible. |
Error: article missing "the" was required before "future" |
| Lastly, I am a fervid language learner and strongly believe, being multilingual open every door along the way and an opportunity of Internship at Modlingua | Lastly, I am a fervid language learner and strongly believe, being multilingual open every door to grab the opportunity of Internship at Modlingua | Improvement of syntax |
| Moreover, it will give me a chance to understand the meaning of translation from a new perspective and how it works in the corporate sector. |
Moreover, it will enable to understand the meaning of translation from best thing since a sliced bread and how it works in the corporate sector. |
Error: Choice of word And syntax improvement |
| I have always been interested in various activities such as music, art, and traveling. | I have always been interested in various activities such as music, art, and travelling. | Spelling error |
| Furthermore, working as a translator and interpreter will definitely notch up my language skills to next level and broaden the opportunities. |
Furthermore, working as a translator and interpreter will definitely kick it up a notch and broaden the opportunities. |
Improvement in syntax structure |
| Error Analysis -: | ||
| Total Number of Source Text: |
639 |
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| Total Number of Target Text: |
635 |
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| Errors related to articles |
1 |
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| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces |
0 |
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| Omissions |
0 |
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| Spelling errors |
2 |
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| Choice of words |
3 |
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| Factual errors |
0 |
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| An eye for details |
No lack of attention to details |
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| Profile Photo Quality |
A clear profile picture at 250x250 pixel size. |
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| Additional comment: |
Apart from above errors, lots of improvement in the sentence structure was done (like using idioms and simplify the text). |
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| Time taken to correct 639 words: |
20 Minutes (approximately) | |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: | 30 Minutes |
