ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018
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| Mr Kansal | Mr. Kansal | Punctuation |
| Mr. Kansal is also working on a translation of literary texts from Spanish to Hindi and vice versa. He looks forward to being a part of a reputed organization having a team of highly qualified professionals and utilize his skills and expertise for the growth of the firm. | Mr. Kansal is also working on a translation of literary texts from Spanish to Hindi and vice versa. He looks forward to being a part of a reputed organization having a team of highly qualified professionals and utilizes his skills and expertise for the growth of the firm. | Grammatical Error |
| I have always been told to figure out what you like to do and then make a career out of it. Three years ago, armed with this bit of philosophy, I set out to find out what I liked to do. | Deleted | Not needed |
| In college, my courses in Spanish were the ones looked forward to the most, and my cultural projects and presentations were the most challenging and rewarding of all my undergraduate coursework. So, it is easy for me to decide to pursue a career in Spanish language and Translation when I'll graduate from college. | In college, my Spanish courses were the ones looked forward to the most and my cultural projects including presentations were the most challenging and rewarding of all my undergraduate coursework. So, it is easy for me to decide to pursue a career in Spanish language and Translation when I'll graduate from college. | Improvement in Syntax and sentence Comma not required End replaced by including |
From the day I have started my graduation from Delhi University in B.A.(H)Spanish, every now and then I have been working on a translation of some famous gazals by Jagjit Singh from Hindi to Spanish and Odes of Pablo Neruda from Spanish to Hindi. In future, if I would ever get an opportunity to translate any famous work of Prem Chand to Spanish I'll be grateful. |
From the day I have started my graduation at the University of Delhi in B.A.(H) Spanish, every now and then I have been working on a translation of some popular gazals by Jagjit Singh from Hindi to Spanish and Odes of Pablo Neruda from Spanish to Hindi. In future, if I would ever get an opportunity to translate any famous work of Prem Chand to Spanish I'll be grateful.
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Improvement in syntax Repetition of word "famous" hence replaced once with "popular". |
| I am also studying the Portuguese language from Delhi University from last 2 years along with my graduation in Spanish to have a better command over European culture and history. And as Spanish and Portuguese and two major languages of South America, I am looking forward topursuing my Master's from a Latin American or European university in Hispanic studies. | I am also studying the Portuguese language from Delhi University from last 2 years along with my graduation in Spanish to have a better command over European culture and history. And as Spanish and Portuguese are two major languages of South America, I am looking forward to pursuing my Master's from a Latin American or European university in Hispanic studies. | Typing Error |
| B.A.(H)Spanish | B.A. (H) Spanish | Punctuation |
| Mr Fidel Castro | Mr. Fidel Castro | Punctuation |
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Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text: 452 Total Number of Target Text: 417 |
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Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces |
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Time taken to correct 452 words: |
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Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: |
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