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| Hello, my name is JAGRITY ARORA and currently I am pursuing my graduation in English Honours from Delhi University. I will be graduated soon in June 2018 because I am currently into my final semester of graduation. Being a resident of Delhi, I completed my schooling from Sachdeva Public School in Rohini Sector 13 with commerce stream in 11th and 12th. I discovered my love in the field of language in my class 11th. Therefore followed the same path and about to complete my graduation in language of English. I am also doing German from Max Mueller Bhavan in CP, and completed my b1 level alongside with my graduation. Also I have a keen interest in writing poems, poems which are inspired by my own life. In other words, poems for me which are not a fiction. One of my poem, happy birthday was published in a book of “SPECTRUM OF THOUGHTS” by turquoise publications. Apart from this, I had also attended intensive writing workshop by “Udaan”. As a social worker, I worked as a member of NSS in my first year of college. I also gave English tuitions to school students in my second year of college. Alongside learning German and being a graduate in English, I discovered my interest in translation so decided to do internship in the same field. One day while surfing on google, I found the internship application for Modlingua and applied for the same. I found the internship as a great opportunity to train myself not only in the field of translation rather more than that. I hope that this internship will make me learn something which is beneficial for my career goals and add as a plus point to my profile. CAREER GOALS Being a bilingual person, my main interest is in learning a language and its culture, so in future I will like to pursue a job as a translator. Not only this, after my graduation I will prepare myself for MA German entrance examination and going to appear for it next year most probably. In addition, I would like to explore the world of translation and the idea how translation works as a bridge in between two or more languages. In future, I will like to cross this bridge by gaining immense knowledge and hard work in field of translation and languages. According to me, working with a language not only makes our thinking different from that of a layman but also it makes our mind to learn multicultural realities. I am so in love with learning different cultures and languages, and I think in languages Translation and Interpretation plays a significant role and according to me, Modlingua is the best leading platform to learn and gain the experience of translation as an intern. As a fresher, I am eager to learn and explore this new world by gaining my knowledge that can not only help in build up my profile but also enhance my personality as a self-development by learning new things that will be considered as a fruit to my fortune. I assure you that I will give my level best if I get select as an intern at Modlingua. I will like to look forward for the same. |
Hello, my name is JAGRITY ARORA and currently, I am pursuing my graduation in English Honours from Delhi University. I will be graduated soon in June 2018 because I am currently in my final semester of graduation. Being a resident of Delhi, I completed my schooling from Sachdeva Public School in Rohini Sector 13 with commerce stream in 11th and 12th. I discovered my love in the field of language in my class 11th. Therefore followed the same path and about to complete my graduation in the language of English. I am also doing German from Max Mueller Bhavan in CP and completed my b1 level alongside with my graduation. Also, I have a keen interest in writing poems, poems which are inspired by my own life. In other words, poems for me which are not a fiction. One of my poem, happy birthday was published in a book of “SPECTRUM OF THOUGHTS” by turquoise publications. Apart from this, I had also attended intensive writing workshop by “Udaan”. As a social worker, I worked as a member of NSS in my first year of college. I also gave English tuitions to school students in my second year of college. Alongside learning German and being a graduate in English, I discovered my interest in translation so decided to do an internship in the same field. One day while surfing on google, I found the internship application for Modlingua and applied for the same. I found the internship as a great opportunity to train myself not only in the field of translation rather more than that. I hope that this internship will make me learn something which is beneficial for my career goals and add as a plus point to my profile. Career Goals Being a bilingual person, my main interest is in learning a language and its culture, so in future, I will like to pursue a job as a translator. Not only this, after my graduation I will prepare myself for MA German entrance examination and I am going to appear for it next year most probably. In addition, I would like to explore the world of translation and the idea how translation works as a bridge in between two or more languages. In future, I will like to cross this bridge by gaining immense knowledge and hard work in the field of translation and languages. According to me, working with a language not only makes our thinking different from that of a layman but also it makes our mind to learn multicultural realities. I am so in love with learning different cultures and languages, and I think in languages Translation and Interpretation plays a significant role and according to me, Modlingua is the best leading platform to learn and gain the experience as an Intern in the field of translation. As a fresher, I am eager to learn and explore this new world by gaining my knowledge that can not only help in the build up my profile but also enhance my personality as a self-development by learning new things that will be considered as a fruit to my fortune. I assure you that I will give my level best if I get select as an intern at Modlingua. I would like to look forward to earning my first work experience at Modlingua. |
, (COMMA) AFTER CURRENTLY IS ADDED. IT SHOULD NOT BE INTO MY FINAL SEMESTER, AS INTO IS USED WHEN SOMETHING OR SOMEONE IS GOING OR BEING PUT INTO ANOTHER LOCATION. COMMA IS REMOVED THERE SHOULD BE NO COMMA (,) AFTER CP NO ERROR NO ERROR Subject is significant in a sentence, so it should be I am going to except of going to. “the” is added after word field Line in corrected version is more suitable i.e. to learn and gain experience as an intern in the field of translation rather than to learn and gain experience of translation as an intern. “the” is added after the word build up. Last line in corrected version is more suitable because in the professional field one should be specific rather than being vague. |
ERROR ANALYSIS
TOTAL NO OF WORDS BEFORE CORRECTION - 540
TOTAL NUMBER OF WORDS AFTER CORRECTION - 554
ERROR RELATED TO ARTICLES - 0
ERROR RELATED TO PUNCTUATION, SYMBOLS, SIGNS, and SPACES - 1
OMISSIONS - 2
SPELLING ERRORS - 0
CHOICE OF WORDS - 1
FACTUAL ERRORS -0
SENTENCE ADDED - 1
PROFILE PICTURE QUALITY - 250* 250 PIXEL PICTURE WAS REQUIRED.
