| ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018 |
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| I am Manoj Kumar. After completing my graduation, I started learning French at Alliance Française. I have command in the French language till C1 level and aims to continue learning the same. I have also done Advanced Diploma in French from Punjab University Chandigarh. My hobbies include playing chess, listening to music and gardening. I want to enhance my skills in content writing and translation, social media marketing, blogging and web development through the internship at Modlingua. I found this internship with Modlingua to be an opportunity to learn all the aspects related to translation. This internship will help me to gain a wide knowledge of translation business. |
I am Manoj Kumar. After completing my graduation, I started learning French at Alliance Française. I have command in the French language till C1 level and aims to continue learning the same. I have also done Advanced Diploma in French from Punjab University Chandigarh. My hobbies include playing chess, listening to music and gardening. I want to enhance my skills in content writing and translation, social media marketing, blogging and web development through the internship at Modlingua. I found this internship with Modlingua to be an opportunity to learn all the aspects related to translation. This internship will help me to gain a wide knowledge of translation business. |
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| Career Goal | Career Goal | |
| Without making goals in our life, we would have nothing to look forward to, or even would not have anything to achieve. So, goals are the most important thing in a person’s life, one can associate goals according to their short-term or long-term plans. | Without making goals in our life, we would have nothing to look forward to, or even would not have anything to achieve. So, goals are the most important thing in a person’s life, one can associate goals according to their short-term or long-term plans. | No change |
| My long-term goal is to be a professional translator. As we know, translators have to convert written material from one language into another language. So, my goal, as a translator, is to provide readers with the translation which completely resembles the original piece of work. | My long-term goal is to be a professional translator. As we know, translators have to convert written material from one language into another language. So, my goal, as a translator, is to provide readers with the translation which completely resembles the original piece of work. |
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| To achieve this amount of perfection a translator must be able to write in a way that maintains the structure and style of the original text while keeping the ideas and facts of the original material accurate. I like to read and write the articles and translation is something which attracts me the most as it can break language barriers between two cultures. |
To achieve this amount of perfection, a translator must be able to write in a way that maintains the structure and style of the original text while keeping the ideas and facts of the original material accurate. I like to read and write the articles and the translation is something which attracts me the most as it can break language barriers between two cultures. | Comma needed after perfection Used 'the' with translation |
| After completing my DALF-C1 and Advance Diploma in French, I have started teaching French. | After completing my DALF-C1 and Advance Diploma in French, I have started teaching French. | No change |
| As I always want to be a translator, I am also practising the translation with the help of my friends. | As I always want to be a translator, I am also practising the translation with the help of my friends. | Not needed |
| Now, I want to start my career in the domain of translation with the help of your internship, which seems like an opportunity for achieving my goal. | Now, I want to start my career in the domain of translation and this internship seems like an opportunity for achieving my goal. | Improvement in sentence structure |
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| Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text: 323 Total Number of Target Text: 318 |
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| Errors related to articles | 1 |
| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces | 1 |
| Omissions | 1 |
| Spelling errors | 0 |
| Choice of words | 1 |
| Factual errors | 0 |
| Choice of words and over all consistency of those words | 1 |
| An eye for details | Lacked attention for details |
| Page layout and overall presentation | Missing |
| Profile Photo Quality | Not applicable here |
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| Time taken to correct 254 words | 30Min |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report | 30Min |
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