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Hello, i’m Ruchika Gulati, currently pursuing B.A (hons.)                        Hello, I am Ruchika Gulati, currently pursuing B.A (hons.)                             
German from Department of Germanic and Romance studies,                  German from Department of Germanic and Romance Studies                            Capitalization errors
University of Delhi and will be graduating this summer.                           University of Delhi and will be graduating this summer. These             
These past three years have not only helped me to develop interest          past three years have not only helped me to develop an interest for                     Omissions
for German language but also enriched my knowledge inhistory             for German language but also enriched my knowledge in the history 
of Germany and german language as well as introduced me to the           of Germany and German language as well as introduced me to the                      Capitalization error
world of translation and interpretation.                                                       world of translation and interpretation.
As a part of this course, i have done a few translations on Rental            As a part of this course, I have done a few translations on Rental                      Capitalization errors
agreements, Recipes, Weather reports, Indo-german relations etc            agreements, Recipes, Weather reports, Indo-German relations etc
which helped me realize where my interest lay. Therefore i decided        which helped me realize where my interest lay. Therefore I decided
to pursue a career in the field of translation and interpretation. After       to pursue a career in the field of translation and interpretation. After
my graduation i’ll be doing my masters in German translation and          my graduation, I plan to do Masters in German translation and                        Punctuation and capita-
interpretation from Jawaharlal Nehru University(already cleared the       interpretation from Jawaharlal Nehru University(already cleared the              lization error and choice
entrance for the same).                                                                               entrance for the same).                                                                                      of words and overall con.
To complement my undergraduate studies, i am also a student at            To complement my undergraduate studies, I am also a student at                     Capitalization error
Max Mueller Bhawan and doing my B2.2 level from there. I have          Max Mueller Bhawan and doing my B2.2 level from there. I have 
also doneinternship in the field of marketing and now looking               also done internship in the field of marketing and now looking                       Omission
forward to be a part of Modlingua.                                                            forward to being a part of Modlingua.                                                              choice of words

CAREER GOALS:                                                                                    CAREER GOALS:
I’m a dedicated worker aiming to help achieve company goals and         I am a dedicated worker aiming to help achieve company goals and               
take on more responsibility as quickly as possible and therefore              take on more responsibility as quickly as possible and therefore 
seeking to apply my abilities to fill the internship role in your                 seeking to apply my abilities to fill the internship role in your 
company.                                                                                                    company.
During this internship, i want to work on my German to the highest       During this internship, I want to work on my German to the highest             Capitalization errors
level possible and believe that along with knowledge practical work      level possible and believe that along with knowledge practical work 
experience is also important. Moreover i want to develop my career      experience is also important. Moreover, I want to develop my career             Punctuation error too
as a professional in such an atmosphere where i can enhance my            as a professional in such an atmosphere where I can enhance my
personality and abilities through challenging myself with higher            personality and abilities through challenging myself with higher 
responsibilities. Because i‘m going to pursue my career in the field        responsibilities. Since I plan to pursue my career in the field                         choice of words & 
of translation and interpretation, Modlingua seems to me such a             of translation and interpretation, Modlingua seems to me such a                    Capitalization errors
platform where i‘ll be able to upgrade my skills and have practical         platform where I will be able to upgrade my skills and have practical
experience too.                                                                                           experience too.

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