| ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018 |
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| A big Bonjour to everybody from Modlingua . ( linguist or not, come aboard!) | Deleted | Not needed |
| So This is our next video which deals on “ How to Bargain a better deal in the professional world. | Deleted | Not Needed |
| Remember when our parents or teachers used to hint us –“ once you go out of the classroom ,you will know the world “.. yeah, Frankly speaking language market is totally different from a language classroom. |
Remember when our parents or teachers used to scold us and tell us, “once you go out of the classroom, you will know the world “.. yeah, frankly speaking, language market is totally different from a language classroom. |
Improvement in syntax and sentence structure No gap between comma and next letter Comma needed after Frankly speaking, Improvement in choice of words |
| Since we havere already equipped ourselves with classroom learning of a language , we better also equip ourselves with the basic survival skills of the cruel market . yes take that “Markets are cruel for those who lack skills. |
Since we have already equipped ourselves with classroom learning of a language, we better equip ourselves with the basic survival skills of the professional market where competition plays its own role. Many times they assume cruel role because of cut-throat competition and human desire to acquire and amass wealth in excess. Yes, please note, “markets are more cruel for those who lack skills'. |
Double space after we. Extra "re" after have Extra space after language and before comma Extra space after market For Yes, Y need to be in Capital letter Lack of closing quotation mark |
| So in this video our Focus is to build upon certain survival skills among the interns ,which in turn will strengthen their professional approach in language oriented work areas and dimensions. The idea is to Understand the basic requirements of a skill ,acquire it and further develop those skills to bring professionalism and assurance in translation and interpretation market. |
So in this internship program, our focus is to build on certain survival skills among the interns so that when they start interacting with the professional world, they are able to cope up well and slowly build on their own strengths in the profession and slowly diversify into a power center of knowledge and skills not only in languages but also in managerial and other related areas. | Extra space between two words video and focus. Same issue between upon and certain - extra space after upon. No comma needed after interns Last sentence syntax improvement Check red marked text error there too Missing comma after video Decapitalizing “U” |
| Of course as said above .We are not discussing about the academic or technical requirements of texts translations or interpretations,because that was a curriculum of academy and class learning, here instead we discuss the market approach and management of grievances and problems that we generally face when we set out to work in a language oriented field especially if we talk about translation and interpretations. | Of course, as said already, we are not discussing the academic or technical requirements of translation of texts that we have already covered in our academic curriculum. Here we are discussing the market approach and management of grievances and professional problems that we generally face while at work. | Comma needed after Of course, No space required before full stop. Improvement in sentence structure Check the red part |
| Apart from all these ,we are bent on empowering our interns with clientele wisdom and business acumen! Say for example … | Apart from all these, we feel highly motivated to share our knowledge and experience with the interns and help them in understanding the expectations of the clients and how to fulfil their requirements or how to make out if the client is trustworthy? Or how to filter out the bad or fake clients? etc. | Check the space Check the choice of words Red part does not give clarity, hence improvement in the syntax done. |
| Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text: 254 Total Number of Target Text: 272 |
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| An eye for details | Lacked attention for details |
| Page layout and overall presentation | Missing |
| Profile Photo Quality | Not applicable here |
| Additional comments if any | Apart from above errors, lots of improvement in the sentence structure was done in order to bring more clarity and coherence |
| Time taken to correct 254 words | 15 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report | 15 Minutes |
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