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Join WhatsApp ChannelAssignment 1 Rominder Kaur
ROMINDER KAUR ASSIGNMENT 1
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My Professional Profile
Hi, I am Rominder Kaur. I was born and brought up in Delhi. I completed my 12th in 2002 from Lady Irwin girls senior secondary school. I completed B.A. in 2006 from Delhi University and B.C.A. with first division in 2009 from Indira Gandhi National Open University. I know how to read, write and speak English, Hindi and Punjabi languages. I am honest and hardworking. My hobbies are listening to music and net surfing. I think Modlingua is a good platform for me to gain some professional knowledge. Working as an intern is a great opportunity for me. I like to take challenges and learn new things. |
My Professional Profile
Hi, I am Rominder Kaur. I was born and brought up in Delhi. I completed my 12th in 2002 from Lady Irwin girls senior secondary school. I completed B.A. in 2006 from Delhi University and B.C.A. with first division in 2009 from Indira Gandhi National Open University. I know how to read, write and speak English, Hindi and Punjabi languages. I am honest and hardworking. My hobbies are listening to music and net surfing. I think Modlingua is a good platform for me to gain some professional knowledge. Working as an intern is a great opportunity for me. I like to take challenges and learn new things. |
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My Career Goals
Goals are the most important thing in a person’s life, without them your life would just be plain and boring with no excitement at all. Without making goals in your life you would have nothing to look forward to, or even have anything to achieve. I always had a keen interest in computers. I studied science with computers during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject. I completed Bachelor of Computer Applications with first division from Indira Gandhi National Open University. I know how to read, write and speak English, Hindi and Punjabi languages. I have been selected as one of the Summer Interns at Modlingua and I think it is a good platform for me to improve my skills and knowledge. I would like to be a part of a reputed organization having a team of highly qualified professionals and utilize my skills and expertise for the growth of the firm. |
My Career Goals
Goals are the most important thing in a person’s life, without them your life would just be plain and boring with no excitement at all. Without making goals in your life you would have nothing to look forward to, or even have anything to achieve. I always had a keen interest in computers. I studied science with computers during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject. I completed Bachelor of Computer Applications with first division from Indira Gandhi National Open University. I know how to read, write and speak English, Hindi and Punjabi languages. I have been selected as one of the Summer Interns at Modlingua and I think it is a good platform for me to improve my skills and knowledge. I would like to be a part of a reputed organization having a team of highly qualified professionals and utilize my skills and expertise for the growth of the firm. |
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| Time taken to correct 264 words: |
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| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: |
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Assignment1_NehaGalhotra
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| Being a Commerce student at school | Being a Commerce student at the school | Article missing |
| mix of Art and Commerce | a mix of Art and Commerce | Article missing |
| I love reading articles of all themes | I love reading articles on all themes | Use of wrong preposition |
| I am keen on taking up the internship project with your organization of such great repute and enter into professional world of the field of languages. | I am keen on taking up the internship project with your organization of such great repute and enter into the professional world of the field of languages. | Article missing |
| -Neha Galhotra,Student, GRS, DU,This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it. | Deleted | Not required |
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| I figured out my interest for teaching way back in my school | I figured out my interest in teaching way back in my school | Use of wrong preposition |
| I aim to become a Professor of French language | I aim to become a Professor of the French language |
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| I also take a few tuitions for French language in my locality. | I also take a few tuitions for the French language in my locality. | Article missing |
| I have successfully completed the first two years of college. | I have successfully completed the first two years of college. |
Extra spacing between ‘successfully’ and ‘completed’ |
| While studying various subjects in college like French | While studying various subjects in college like French |
Extra spacing between ‘studying’ and ‘various’ |
| I have developed interest in creative writing, debating, translation, speaking etc | I have developed an interest in creative writing, debating, translation, speaking etc | Article missing |
| …these skills that I have acquired during the years,also my aptitude and sincerity will enable me to do justice to your Summer Internship Project2018… | …these skills that I have acquired during the years, also my aptitude and sincerity will enable me to do justice to your Summer Internship Project 2018… | Spacing missing between ‘comma’ and ‘also’ |
| I am keen to take up the Internship Project to gain some professional experience related to the field of languages |
I am keen to take up the Internship Project to gain some professional experience related to the field of languages | Extra spacing between ‘professional’ and ‘experience’ |
| I will work with the best of my ability and try the level best to provide you quality work. |
I will work to the best of my ability and try the level best to provide you quality work. |
Use of wrong preposition |
| -Neha Galhotra,Student,GRS, DU,This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it. | Deleted | Not required |
| Total Number of source text: 502 Total Number of Target text: 496 |
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