Version 1- Draft Version                                                              Version 2- Corrected Version                                                    Comments/ Types of errors

1.PROFILE PHOTO
The profile photo is original.                                                  The profile photo is cropped, applied filters,                           The profile picture is not the size of 250 x 250                                                                                                            resized.                                                                                     pixel.
                                                                                                  
2. BRIEF PROFILE

I had bought variety of bracelets from                                    I bought a variety of bracelets from my hometown in India     No need to use the past participle in the sentence.
my hometown in India and then sold those bracelets to         and sold those bracelets to friends,...
friends,...
                                                                 
                                                                                                                                                                                                                
In June 2017, a member from my community trusted me...   In June 2017, a member of my community trusted me...          Wrong usage of preposition.


From 3rd April 2018, I am working for                                 From 3rd April 2018, I am working on                                       Wrong usage of preposition.
Clockwork Captions.                                                             Clockwork Captions.

3. CAREER GOALS
providing grammmatically correct translation...                    providing grammatically correct translation...                             Spelling mistake.

Error Analysis:
Total number of source text: 311
Total number of  Target text: 309
Errors related to articles: 0
Errors related to punctuation, spaces, symbols, signs; 0
Spelling Errors: 1
Choice of words and overall consistency of those words: 4
Page Layout and Overall Presentation: N/A
Time Taken to Correct the mistakes: 15 minutes
Time Taken to prepare this evaluation report: 60 minutes
     







                                                                                         

Currently pursuing B.A. English Hons from Delhi University and Diploma in French language from St. Stephens college, Srishti has an immense passion for learning foreign languages. She is always found listening to random songs of different languages and a fanatic fan of Korean culture.  
She spends all her time in reading books, articles and listening to music which only increases her understanding of French language but also helps in keeping in touch with the dynamics of the language. At Modlingua, she is trying to expand her knowledge into a more professional aspect of it and learning more about translation work in English and French. 
She is a self-motivated person and aims to work in French someday as a Cultural Interpreter and Linguistic Expert.

VERSION2: CORRECTED VERSION
She spends her time in reading books, articles and listening to music which helps to increase the understanding of French language as well as keeping in touch with the dynamics of the language. At Modlingua, she is trying to expand her knowledge of professional world and learning more about translation work in English and French.
S​he is a self-motivated person and aims to work as Cultural Interpreter and Linguistic Expert.

CAREER GOALS
VERSION 1: DRAFT VERSION
Since my schooling days, a passion and desire for languages were always rushing into me. being from Delhi, a multicultural yet Hindi speaking state I used to wonder how my Bengali, South Indian and Punjabi neighbours (shifted house several times and therefore had golden chance of meeting many people) were felt so comfortable and homey in between their conversations in vernacular, and I, just simply enjoyed that pleasure of listening to them. Maturing with my blurry goal of doing something in the domain of languages, I started to explore it with practical things like reading newspaper, watching chat-shows etc. 
I completed my high school with commerce stream which gave me the best lessons of my life. through it. I learnt the necessity of being dynamic with the current surroundings and the ways to connect theoretical knowledge with the practical world. Taking the roles of group leaders, narrator etc gave me the confidence to face audience anytime. Luckily, I got the chance of being Commerce Club President (2015-2016) and managing the commerce festival- Synergy 2016 on my own as a student representative. This phase sharpened my communication skills and confidence to take it to another level.
I'm an avid chatter and completely talkative person. connecting to more and more people is my most enjoyable hobby. Being able to speak and communicate my ideas to others makes me feel like a more natural self. 
Two years in the graduation is the best ongoing time of my life as I got the course I wanted, i.e. English language and Literature (Hons) and simultaneously I'm in the second year of French language learning course. The interlinked cultural and linguistic history of these languages are complementary not only to each other but also for me as the knowledge of French language helps me in understanding texts of say, 14th and 16th century easily and secondly, I can read those texts originally without the translated versions.
For the present, my goals are to get experiences from as many fields as it is possible until my graduation. I'm sure of the domain I want to work in, i.e. communication sector. I envision myself as an orator dealing with various languages and tons of people, sharing and exchanging knowledge with them.
For a human mind, I believe any horizon can be created with efforts, will and consistency. To me, it means learning so many languages that so I can travel the world independently.
VERSION 2: CORRECTED VERSION
Since my schooling days, I was passionate towards languages. Being from Delhi, a multicultural yet Hindi speaking state I used to wonder how my Bengali, South Indian and Punjabi neighbours (shifted house several times and therefore had golden chance of meeting many people) were felt so comfortable and homely in their conversations in vernacular, and I, just simply enjoyed that pleasure of listening to them.
Connecting to more and more people is my most enjoyable hobby. Being able to speak and communicate my ideas to others makes me feel more true to natural self. 
The interlinked cultural and linguistic history of these languages are complementary to each other. To me, the knowledge of French language facilitates the understanding of some texts say, 14th and 16th century novels easily and secondly, I can read those texts originally without the translated versions.
For a human mind, I believe any horizon can be created with efforts, will and consistency. To me, it means learning so many languages so that I can travel the world independently.