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Learning a new language and its culture is a really big interest of mine.
This course helped me in developing myself and to travel the other country alone.
I started learning translation and get my interest into it.
The translation work is needed now days due to the increasing number of refugees.
I had translated some texts
PROFILE
I am Rajul Jain and I am from Delhi
I have taken this platform
Recently I get a new interest in writing thoughts.
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I am very fascinated towards learning a new language and its culture.
This course helped me to improve myself and gave me an opportunity to go for my further studies ti Germany.
I started doing translation and got my interest into it.
There is a great need of translators and interpreters now a days due to various reasons.
I have a great command over translation rather than interpretation in some fields.
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I have chosen this platform
Recently, i get a new interest in writing thoughts.
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Improvement of sentence
Choice of words
Choice of words and spelling error
Sentence Improvement
Grammatical error
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Choice of words
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ERROR ANALYSIS
Errors related to article : 0
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces : 2
Omissions : 1
Spelling Errors : 1
Choice of words : 3
Factual errors : 2
COMMENTS : There are many changes which i had done and there is also more improvement in the text, so that one can understand it easily.
Time taken to correct words : 20 minutes
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report : 30minutes