​NIDHI JOSHI – Assignment 1   Profile Version 1 – Draft Version    Version 2 – Corrected Version Comments/ Types of Errors Currently I am pursuing my bachelor studies in Spanish Language Literature and Culture. Currently, I am pursuing my bachelor studies in Spanish Language Literature and Culture. Comma needed after Currently Career Goals Version 1 – Draft Version  Version 2 – Corrected Version Comments/ Types of Errors Coming from a social science background, the social aspect of the language enthralls me. Coming from a social science background, the social aspect of the language enthrals me. Spelling of “enthrall” Enthrall British English spelling Enthral American English spelling   Collaborating with other parts of the world resulting the development of both sides. Collaborating with other parts of the world resulting in the development of both sides. Sentence structure error.   I look forward to be the connecting factor and bring the world closer I look forward to being the connecting factor and bring the world closer Grammar error I am extremely excited and honored to be a part of the Modlingua I am extremely excited and honoured to be a part of the Modlingua Spelling of “honored” Honored – American English Honoured – British English ERROR ANALYSIS Total Number of Source Text: 372 Total Number of Target Text: 05 Errors related to articles: 0   Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces: 1 Omissions: 1 Spelling errors: 2 Choice of words: 1 Factual errors: 0 Choice of words and overall consistency of those words: Good  An eye for details: Satisfactory. Can do better.  Page layout and overall presentation: Good  Profile Photo Quality 250* 187 pixels Time taken to correct 372 words: 25 minutes Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: 30 minutes