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| Conducted Russian language classes at ONGC Videsh on behalf of Amity Institute of Training and development from September 2016 till January 24, 2017 and October 2015 to February 2016. |
In addition, I have conducted Russian language training classes at ONGC Videsh on behalf of Amity Institute of Training and development from September 2016 till January 24, 2017, and October 2015 to February 2016. |
Improvement in syntax and sentence structure |
| Took voluntary guide tours at National Museum from 2014-16. |
I have been active as a volunteer tour guide at National Museum from 2014-16. |
Improvement in syntax and sentence structure |
| Done translation work for companies like Soby Satellite & Sanudhrishti Exports, New Steel World, Grail Research, Dastaan Engineering, Vision Intl People Group & Russian Centre of Science & Culture | Also, I have done translation work for companies like Soby Satellite & Sanudhrishti Exports, New Steel World, Grail Research, Dastaan Engineering, Vision Intl People Group & Russian Centre of Science & Culture | Sentence syntax improvement |
| I have managed to simultaneously continue my passion for language by learning Russian language. | I have managed to simultaneously continue my passion for language by learning the Russian language. | Use of Article The |
| I think the internship with Modlingua will give me an edge to this competitive field and will provide me with the right exposure | I think the internship with Modlingua will give me an edge to this competitive field and will provide me with the right exposure | Check the spelling mistake of Modlingua |
| Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text: 127 Total Number of Target Text: 141 |
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| Errors related to articles | |
| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces | 0 |
| Spelling errors | 1 |
| Choice of words | 3 |
| Factual errors | 0 |
| Choice of words and over all consistency of those words | 3 |
| An eye for details | Lacked attention for details |
| Page layout and overall presentation | Missing |
| Profile Photo Quality | Not applicable here |
| Additional comments if any | Apart from above errors, lots of improvement in the sentence structure was done in order to bring more clarity and coherence |
| Time taken to correct 127 words | 15 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report | 30 Minutes |
