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Version-2- Correction |
Comments/Types of errors |
| Hi, This is Pallavi, a BA student of Spanish Language in Jawaharlal Nehru university. |
My name is Pallavi, I am currently pursuing a bachelor degree in Spanish from Jawaharlal Nehru University. |
Error- very informal Improvement in sentence structure. |
enhance my skills in conjunction with the organizational requirements and goal. |
enhance my skills in conjunction with the organizational requirements and goals. |
Error-S is missing Transformed the word GOAL from singular to plural. |
| Not only out of interest but also came to know about the professional benefits of a language into an organisation which became the main reason for me to go for language courses |
Not only out of interest but also came to know about the professional benefits of a language into an organisation which became the main reason for me to go for language course |
Error – Plural word Removed S |
| I am looking forward to working as a translator in the business field in near future. |
I am looking forward to work as a translator in the business field in near future. |
Error-Wrong tense form |
Via ModlinguaI can enrich my previous experiences as through this I will be able to use my knowledge of language in work field. |
Via Modlingua, I can enrich my previous experiences as I will be able to use my knowledge of language in work field. |
Error- no comma Added Comma and removed unwanted words like ‘through’ and ‘this’ |
Error analysis;- Total no. of source text: Total no. of targeted text: Error Related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces Omissions Spelling error Choice of words Factual error An eye for details Profile photo quality Additional comments Time taken to correct 258 words Time take to prepare this evaluation report |
258 257 1 2 0 0 0 No lack of attention for detail A picture of 1280x960 pixel has been sent Tried to keep the content short and precise. Provided all the needed info. 15-20 minutes 30 minutes |
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