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In my opinion, there is no better place to learn how to communicate with others in the field of business other than in XYZ, University. The communications department has inculcated in me the knowledge about the proper usage¹ of English language while² I join an organization in future. And³ it has also prepared and built confidence in me to handle interviews and group discussions which I feel requires much attention which⁴ is lacking in any ordinary individual. With the help of the department I am now more aware⁵ and had further⁶ honed my skills for the future purpose of my work life. The success of the department is backed by the strong faculty in it who work responsibly not for the sake of the university goals and objectives but for⁷ the sake of their purpose, and for that reason it is not simply a lecture. It is individual attention even to the last person sitting in the back.  And that I feel defines proper education for all and not just for a handful few.

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In my opinion, there is no better place to learn how to communicate with others in the field of business other than in XYZ University. The communications department has inculcated in me the knowledge about proper usage of English language when I join an organization in future. It has also prepared and built confidence in me to handle interviews and group discussions which I feel requires much attention that is lacking in an ordinary individual. With the help of the department I am now aware and have further honed my skills for future purposes of my work life. The success of the department is backed by the strong faculty in it who work responsibly not for the sake of the university goals and objectives but for the sake of fulfilling their purpose of imparting practical knowledge. Faculty is driven towards giving individual attention even to the last person sitting at the back of the classroom. And that, I feel defines proper education for all.

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⁸It is no doubt that communication plays a vital role in human life. Communication plays one of the major ⁹role during our graduation. In XYZ University, we learnt why communication skills are necessary in a corporate world. We learnt about professional culture and how it shapes our future.
We learnt¹⁰ not only theoretically but practically also¹¹ through different activities like Mock Interviews, Group Discussions, Role play, Extempore, Debate ¹²& JAM etc. that enhanced our verbal and non verbal skills and developed self confidence. We have many clubs in our university where we can learn a lot, one among them is Literary Club, where we learn and explore to the best of our potential.

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Communication plays one of the major roles during our undergraduate program. In XYZ Universities, we have learned why communication skills are necessary in a corporate world. We learnt about professional culture and how it shapes our future.
We have learned not only theoretically but also practically through different activities like Mock Interviews, Group Discussions, Role play, Extempore, Debate and JAM etc. that enhanced our verbal and non verbal skills and developed self confidence. We have many clubs in our university where we can learn a lot, one among them is Literary Club, where we learn and explore to the best of our potential

¹³My name is XYZ, 24 doing handsomely well in my little life. I am a ¹⁸proud alumnus XYZ Business School (XYZ), esteemed wing of XYZ University and hold a coveted Masters Degree ¹⁴In Management. During the course of 2 years, ¹⁵I read and got inspired from the quintessential role, language and communication plays in any business. It was a great honour for me to be coached under the visionary mentorship of erudite faculties of XYZ School of Language and Communication who extended their whole hearted support to make me learn and realize the dynamics of the related subjects in this regard.
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I am a proud alumnus of XYZ Business School (XYZ), esteemed wing of XYZ University and hold a coveted Masters Degree in Management. During the course of 2 years, I studied and understood the vital role that language and communication plays in any business. It was an honour for me to be coached under the visionary mentorship of erudite faculties of XYZ School of Language and Communication who extended their whole hearted support to make me learn and realize the dynamics of the related subjects in this regard.

 Extensive public speaking sessions, wholesome debates, regular on screen presentation, dummy case studies were the course’s few highlights which enabled me to derive reasonable and unequivocal understanding of the subject’s core values. Moreover the whole course was designed from a versatile perspective, inculcating a vast opportunities ¹⁶for the learner to grow, nurture and get accustomed in disparate ethnographies.
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Extensive public speaking sessions, wholesome debates, regular on screen presentation, dummy case studies were the course’s few highlights which enabled me to derive reasonable and unequivocal understanding of the subject’s core values. Moreover the whole course was designed from a versatile perspective, inculcating a vast opportunities for the learner to grow and   get accustomed with today’s diversity.

This has greatly helped me in motivating my view¹⁷ points to our invaluable clients, hence offering them with key deliverables over mail and telephonic support .It also spawned a great affinity to a poly cultural ecosystem prevailing within the very premises of my work domain.My success story owe a fair share of its triumph to the worthwhile learning, and experiences, I had within the classroom sessions, effective coaching and an equally humble & unwavering support from all my teachers cum mentors at XYZ School of Language and Communication.
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This has greatly motivated me to express my view points to our invaluable clients, hence offering them with key deliverables over mail and telephonic support .It also spawned a great affinity to a poly cultural ecosystem prevailing within the very premises of my work domain. My success story owes a fair share of its triumph to the worthwhile learning, and experiences, I had within the classroom sessions, effective coaching and an equally humble & unwavering support from all my teachers cum mentors at XYZ School of Language and Communication.
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