Version 1- Draft Version  Brief Profile  Shubhangi Gupta from Delhi pursued a diploma course in Spanish from St. Stephens College, Delhi and currently learning the same from Cervantes Institute, New Delhi where she scored highest marks in each of her batches. She is fascinated and has interest in Spanish culture which motivated her to pursue this language. She previously interned in a corporate company and now, wishes to see herself as a translator or an interpreter and hence chose to join Modlingua as a management intern, which will open numerous opportunities for her in the future in the corporate world.    Career Goals   I always had a variety of interests from sports to computers but learning a language was never in my books. Throughout my high school years, I have participated in various competitions related to sports, but it was always a hobby of mine. But the thing I have always wanted to do was to work in an MNC. During class 11th and 12th I opted for commerce because I was always interested in knowing how a company works, its management and I did considerably good and after finishing my 12th, | pursued my Bachelor's in Commerce from Delhi University. After graduation, I wanted to pursue Post Graduation and for that I gave lots of entrances also but I didn't get any good response, so I decided to give it another try but in the meantime I wanted to do something new and different and after a lot of consideration, I chose to learn a new language and that decision turned out to be the best decision of my life because I got so interested in it that I chose it as my future career. And, currently, I am also pursuing my Post Graduation because I still am interested in knowing things related to management along with the language learning.    Version 2- Corrected Version 

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Omission  Career Goals  entrances also, however, I didn't get any good response                 

Use of transitional phrase  give it another try, moreover, in the meantime                                

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An eye for details Good eye for detail 

Page layout and overall presentation   Good 

Profile Photo Quality      No errors 

Additional comments if any Improvement in the sentence structure was done

Time taken to correct 302 words 20 Minutes 

Time taken to prepare this evaluation report 20 Minutes