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| I am a student of communication | I am a student of communication | |
| from Kolkata. Right from choosing | from Kolkata. Right from choosing | |
| Mass Communication as my | Mass Communication as my | |
| graduation and post graduation | graduation and post graduation | |
| subject under the University of | subject under the University of | |
| Calcutta, to taking up a lateral Spanish | Calcutta, to taking up a lateral Spanish | |
| language course from Ramakrishna | language course from Ramakrishna | |
| Mission and Indo Hispanic Language | Mission and Indo Hispanic Language | |
| academy, I have been trying to broaden | academy, I have been trying to broaden | |
| my scope in the field of communication. | my scope in the field of communication. | |
| I started out as a freelancer in television | I started out as a freelancer in television | Change in sentence structure |
| productions and then moved on to working | productions and then moved on to working | |
| for DataCore Systems as a | for DataCore Systems as a | |
| Spanish translator in an ad monitoring | Spanish translator in an ad monitoring | |
| process. Presently I work at Wipro | process. Presently I am working at Wipro | |
| Limited as a Spanish Language resource. | Limited as a Spanish Language resource. | |
| I have a Dele B1 certification and | I have a Dele B1 certification and | |
| am preparing for higher levels to | am preparing for higher levels to | |
| lay a strong foundation to go forward | lay a strong foundation, to go forward | comma needed |
| in the field of Translation and | in the field of Translation and | |
| Interpretation. Currently, I am an | Interpretation. Currently, I am an | |
| intern at Modlingua and hope to gain an | intern at Modlingua and hope to gain an | |
| experience about the operational | experience about the operational | |
| structure of the field | structure of the field | |
| of Translation and Interpretation. | of Translation and Interpretation. | |
| Career Goals | ||
| As far as identifyinggoals go I | As far as identifying goals go, I | comma needed |
| wouldn’t say I am there | wouldn’t say I am there | |
| yet. I have always been | yet. I have always been | |
| interested in a diverse range | interested in a diverse range | |
| of activities such as sports, | of activities such as sports, | |
| dancing, movies and | dancing, movies and | |
| reading; and limiting myself | reading; and limiting myself | |
| to some specific milestones | to some specific milestones | |
| does not fit well with me. | does not fit well with me. | |
| As a student of communication, | As a student of communication, | comma needed |
| after finishing graduation and | after finishing graduation and | |
| primary Spanish education | primary Spanish education, | |
| I had dreamed of using | I had dreamed of using | |
| language as a resource within | language as a resource within | |
| my range of capabilities and to | my range of capabilities and to | |
| keep updating that range | keep updating that range | |
| with each passing step. | with each passing step. | |
| What started out as a hobby, | What started out as a hobby, | |
| been talked into by peers, | been talked into by peers, | |
| turned into a passion that | turned into a passion that | |
| instilled an urge to go deeper into | instilled an urge to go deeper into | |
| the subject. I have been | the subject. I have been | |
| working as a Spanish language | working as a Spanish language | |
| resource for more than | resource for more than | |
| two years. | two years. | |
| Now I am looking forward to | Now I am looking forward to | |
| my internship at Modlingua | my internship at Modlingua | |
| which will hopefully | which will hopefully | |
| open gateways of knowledge | open gateways of knowledge | |
| and awareness regarding the | and awareness regarding the | |
| field of translation and interpretation, | field of translation and interpretation, | |
| and its application in tertiary | and its application in tertiary | |
| fields such as online marketing, | fields such as online marketing, | |
| social media marketing, branding and | social media marketing, branding and | |
| market research, which are beyond | market research, which are beyond | |
| regular classroom curriculum. | regular classroom curriculum. | |
| I have a desire to venture into new | I have a desire to venture into new | Word substitution |
| possibilities and experience work | possibilities and experience work | |
| modules which I have not faced before. | modules which I have not faced before. | area substituted by field |
| Translation and Interpretation is a vast | Translation and Interpretation is a vast | |
| area. It changes with the domain | field. It changes with the domain | |
| it is applied in. I aspire to look around this | it is applied in. I aspire to look around this | |
| vastness and gather as much as possible. | vastness and gather as much as possible. | |
| My Career goal is to not reach a specific | My career goal is to not reach a specific | Case type error |
| point but to make a journey which would | point but to make a journey which would | |
| inspire me to take up difficult challenges | inspire me to take up difficult challenges | |
| and grow with every step so that each day | and grow with every step so that each day | |
| I can improve on what I had the day before. | I can improve on what I had the day before. |
| Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text: 404 Total Number of Target Text: 405 |
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| Errors related to articles | 0 |
| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces, case type | 4 |
| Omissions | 0 |
| Spelling errors | 0 |
| Choice of words | 1 |
| Choice of words and overall consistency of those words | 1 |
| Sentence structure change | 1 |
Time taken to correct 404 words: |
60 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: | 30 Minutes |
