| ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018 | ||
| BRIEF PROFILE | ||
| Version 1 – Draft version | Version 2 – Corrected Version | Comments/ Types of errors |
| I moved to Indira Gandhi National Tribal University (Central University), Amarkantak, Madhya Pradesh to further my higher degree both in under-graduate and post-graduate studies | I moved to Indira Gandhi National Tribal University (Central University), Amarkantak, Madhya Pradesh to further my higher degree both in undergraduate and post-graduate studies. | Punctuation space in “undergraduate” |
| During the graduation English language being a compulsory subject I evinced greater interest in being with English language. well conversant | During the graduation English language is a compulsory subject I evinced greater interest in being well conversant with English language. | Improvement in syntax and sentence structure |
| I tried to be at my best in English language and most of the time on seminars and symposiums , | I tried to be at my best in English language and most of the time on seminars and symposiums, | Comma after “symposiums” |
| This was solely to ponder to my inherent propensity for English language. | This was only for pondering to my inherent propensity for English language. | Improvement in syntax and sentence structure |
| As a part of this I played an active role in the University in various dramas, | As a part of this, I played an active role in the University in various dramas, | Comma after “this” |
| In recognition of my excellent performance as the student in the examinations I was awarded gold medal in Political Science (Hons.) during the year 2013-16. | In recognition of my excellent performance as the student in the examinations, I was awarded gold medal in Political Science (Hons.) during the year 2013-16. | Comma after “examinations” |
| Also I expect the repetition of this once the result of post graduation comes out for the session 2016-2018. | Also, I expect the repetition of this once the result of post-graduation comes out for the session 2016-2018. | Comma after “Also” |
| A student of Political Science I developed greater interest in International Relations | A student of Political Science I developed a greater interests in International Relations | Article “a” is missing after “developed” and before “greater” |
| In order to reach the set goal I need to be acquainted with my own limitations to travel into the unknown realms of knowledge. | In order to reach the set goal, I need to be acquainted with my own limitations to travel into the unknown realms of knowledge. | Comma after “goal” |
| For this I need to be trained specific skills and technologies, | For this, I need to be trained specific skills and technologies, | Punctuation space , comma after “this” |
| Career Goals | ||
| Instead to keep myself confined to classroom knowledge and specific books, | Instead, to keep myself confined to classroom knowledge and specific books, | Punctuation space, comma after “Instead” |
| I always take it a pleasure and a dynamic aspect of my life to be acquainted with my own limitations and come back with renewed strength and vigor to grapple with the new challenges and move forward. | I always take it a pleasure and a dynamic aspect of my life to be acquainted with my own limitations and come back with renewed strength and vigor to grapple with the new challenges and move forward. | Spelling mistake “Vigour” written as Vigor |
| Brief Profile and Career Goals were exchanged. | ||
| Error Analysis Total number of source text: 515 Total number of target text: 515 |
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| Error related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces | 8 |
| Choice of words | 2 |
| Spelling error | 1 |
| Grammatical mistake | 1 |
| Profile photo | Not appropriate |
| Page layout and overall presentation | missing |
