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ERROR ANALYSIS (Professional profile)
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 A student of Jawaharlal Nehru University, pursuing her bachelor’s in Spanish. I have been teaching Spanish to young school kids since last year and have completed my second year, only this month. I believe in healthy contribution to the organization with a positive approach, confidence, and willingness to learn. I am a theatre and language enthusiast and like to read. I have acquired knowledge about the language, literature and cultural studies of Spanish and wish to work closely in my field.
I am a student of Jawaharlal Nehru University.
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pursuing my bachelor's in Spanish.
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ERROR ANALYSIS (Career goals)

When I began my college career, I knew I wanted to pursue a major that would provide me with a useful skill set: something that would enable me to grow as an individual, to challenge myself, and ultimately to better understand the world around me. This is why I have chosen to study Spanish Language and Culture, a major that focuses on the understanding and interpretation of the language and the society. I was intrigued to see the diversity of the relevance of foreign language in a different notion: an artistic, rather than monetary ideal. Through my love of reading and writing in my own language, my enjoyment of doing theatre and my two years so far studying Spanish, I have come to appreciate the artistic reality of language.

I have opted for Portuguese as my elective subject as I have learned that my interest in knowing a language that is similar to any major could be of  enormous benefit in the working world.

Through this internship, I want to achieve the goal of gaining practical and marketable skill of a foreign language, which I can utilize in any sphere of employment.

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I have opted for Portuguese as my elective subject as I have learned that my interest in knowing more languages can yield enormous benefit in the professional world. 
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Error Analysis -:
Total Number of Source Text: 273
Total Number of Target Text: 265
Errors related to articles: 1
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces: 0
Omissions: 1
Spelling errors : 0
Choice of words: 1
Factual errors: 0
An eye for details: No lack of attention for details
Profile Photo Quality: A clear profile picture at 250x250 pixel size.
Additional comments: Errors were omitted.
Time  taken to correct 639 words: 15 Minutes (approximately)
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: 25 Minutes
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