| Version 1- Draft Version I like mentally stimulating activities such like various creative outlets |
Version 2 – Corrected Version I like mentally stimulating activities such as various creative outlets: |
Comments/ Types of errors Typo, redundancy with “such” followed by “like” while meaning to type “as”. |
What could have been improved after reviewing:
I am an introvert through and through. I enjoy detail-oriented tasks and mentally-stimulating activities. I like mentally stimulating activities such as various creative outlets I would like to travel as a visiting scholar to Geneva, one of the world’s leading cities in translation to experience at first hand, the translation world on the international level. Becoming a recognized published translator for transferring a critically-approved publication to my First language |
I am an introvert 100% or I have an introverted personality. I enjoy detail-oriented tasks and mentally stimulating activities . Some of the creative outlets I resort to are.. Or I like intellectual activities such as various creative outlets… I would like to travel as a visiting scholar to Geneva, one the world’s leading cities in translation. I would love to experience, at first hand, the translation world on the international level. Becoming a recognized published translator for translating a critically-approved publication to my first language. |
Could have been expressed better There is a kind of redundancy with the expression “mentally stimulating” The sentence seems to run too long. It could have been divided into two sentences. Some punctuation editing is needed as well. Using “transferring” to mean “translating”. Capitalizing “First” was a typo. unnecessary |
Error AnalysisTotal
Number of Source Text: 504
Total Number of Target Text:505
| Errors related to articles | 0 |
| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces | 1 0 |
| Omissions | 0 |
| Spelling errors | 0 |
| Choice of words | 1 |
| Factual errors | 0 |
| Choice of words and overall consistency of those words | 0 |
| An eye for details | There is an eye for detail |
| Page layout and overall presentation | present |
| Profile Photo Quality | Acceptable The same picture submitted was used without editing. I would assume it is good quality |
| Additional comments if any | The team edited one mistake that I apologize for missing before submitting. The rest is my own corrections after reviewing it now. There is always room for improvement and I found this assignment quite enriching. The submission took longer than expected due to technical difficulties with the system. |
| Time taken to correct 504 words: | 05 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: | 15 Minutes |
