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I am Roshni Mishra.I am pursuing diploma in French from Jesus and Mary College, Delhi University. In past , I have done internship in marketing at Atul Enterprises, Nestle India Limited.
I am Roshni Mishra. I am pursuing diploma in French from Jesus and Mary College, Delhi University. In past, I have done internship in marketing at Atul Enterprises, Nestle India Limited. No gap after fullstop. No need of space before comma
I have also been a tutor for French at Miskimp (a social venture project which is helping kids to get free training, education and mentoring).
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Apart from this, I have been a freelance content writer. I have keen interest in political science and which helped me to pursue B.A (H) political science, Delhi University. Apart from this, I have been a freelance content writer. I have a keen interest in political science and which helped me to pursue B.A (H) political science, Delhi University.
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Throughout my high school years I studied C++ language during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject. Throughout my high school years, I studied C++ language during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject
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In my free time, I love reading books, Quora and surfing web.
CAREER GOALS
In my free time, I love reading books, Quora and surfing the web.
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I have keen interest in learning a foreign language because it not only adds a skill in you but also makes you confident, fluent and smarter. It also enhances your career opportunities. I am preparing to score well in DELF B1. My short term goal is to pursue masters in French from Jawaharlal Nehru University, New Delhi.
Learning language is a beautiful journey and teaching a language is even prettier. I want to do PHD in French from Foreing University in future as I love teaching and want to be a professor in an Indian university. I believe that in India, we still give importance to 2 languages mostly; I want people to realize and see that there is a lot of scope in future by learning foreign language courses.
I have also been associated with social causes and will continue teaching kids and mentoring them in French. I have a keen interest in learning a foreign language because it not only adds a skill to you but also makes you confident, fluent and smarter. It also enhances your career opportunities. I am preparing to score well in DELF B1. My short- term goal is to pursue masters in French from Jawaharlal Nehru University, New Delhi.
Learning language is a beautiful journey and teaching a language is even prettier. I want to do PhD in French from Foreing University in future as I love teaching and want to be a professor at Indian university. I believe that in India, we still give importance to 2 languages mostly; I want people to realize and see that there ia a lot of scope in future by learning foreign language courses. I have also been associated with social causes and will continue teaching kids and mentor them in French. Improvement in the syntax error. Check the hyphen. Spelling mistakes
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