ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018
| Version 1 - Draft version | Version 2 – Corrected version | Comments/ Types of errors |
| Hello! I am Simona Tessa. Since 2011, I have been living in Rome. | Since 2011, I have lived in Rome. | Check the verb. |
| In this university, I have got the possibility to learn what I love, languages and their culture, in particular with translation and interpreting. | I have had Languages for translation and interpreting and their culture. |
Check the verb. Improvement in sentence structure. |
| I would like to continue my studies with languages, in particular with Chinese and English as well as I would like to sign up for a postgraduate course in Organisation and Marketing for Business Communication. | Therefore | Improvement in sentence structure. |
| I would like to improve in different fields such as Marketing and Sales, Market Research, Entrepreneurship and terminology in marketing/management. | I would like to improve myself Marketing/Management |
Check the choice of words Capital letter M for Marketing and Manangement |
| For this reason, this year in March | Therefore, this year in March | Repeating word Improvement in syntax and sentence structure |
| Today, I am a customer care assistant and during this year in my job, I have learnt to collaborate in a teamwork. | Years | Add the ‘s’ |
| Therefore, I have the capacity to do the work that is entrusted to me in a good way. | Deleted | It is not clear |
| In particular, the sector I would like to improve is the translation in English and Chinese languages as well as learning more word in marketing and entrepreneurship fields. | Marketing and Entrepreneurship | Capital letter M and E for Marketing and Entrepreneurship |
| This kind of work helps me to improve my capacity in the field that I really like such as speaking and translation. | Deleted | Not needed |
| In my future, I would become a managing director, especially in marketing and business fields. | Managing Director Marketing and Business fields |
Capital letter |
| At the end of this year, I would like to continue my academic studies in management and business communication to become a director in communication with enterprises or something which is similar to this kind of job. | Academic Management and Business Communication Communication with Enterprises |
Capital letter |
Error Analysis
| Total Number of Source Text: 33 Total Number of Target Text: 91 |
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| Errors related to articles | 0 |
| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces | 0 |
| Omissions | 4 |
| Spelling errors | 1 |
| Choice of words | 4 |
| Factual errors | 2 |
| Choice of words and overall consistency of those words | 1 |
| An eye for details | Lacked attention for details and words. |
| Page layout and overall presentation | Correct |
| Profile Photo Quality | Not applicable here. |
| Additional comments if any | Sometimes repetitive in explaning a thought. |
| Time taken to correct: | 45 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: | 15 Minutes |
