| ASSIGNMENT 1 - ERROR ANALYSIS REPORT By- ANJALI CHAWLA |
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| Version 1 - Draft version | Version 2- Corrected version | Comments/ Types of errors |
| Graduating with honours in French and Francophone studies and planning to master in the same. | Graduated with honors in French and Francophone studies and planning to do master degree in the same. | Improvement in sentence structure and spellings. |
| Anjali chawla acquires high level of Fluency in English and French language. | Anjali Chawla acquires high level of fluency in English and French language. | First letter of the names are always in capital. |
| She has organized various French programs held her university. |
She has organized various French events at university level. |
Improvement in syntax and sentence structure. |
| As a student she has been tutioning students till class 10. |
As a student, she has been giving private tutions to students till class 10. | Bad vocabulary. |
| A dedicated student who is a team player with strong interpersonal and excellent communication skills in English, Hindi, Punjabi, French and bit of Spanish as well because she has studied the introductory level of Spanish. | A dedicated student who is a team player with strong interpersonal and excellent communication skills in English, Hindi, Punjabi, French and little bit of Spanish as well as she acquires introductory level of Spanish language i.e A1 level. | Improvement in sentence structure and usage of connectors like because, as, but etc. |
| She possesses a structured approach to problem solving and meeting deadlines. | She follows the structured approach for problem solving and meeting deadlines. | Improvement required in correct utilization of words, articles and prepositions. |
| As it is said ‘’ Those who know nothing of foreign languages know nothing of their own’’. | As it is said ‘’ Those who know nothing of Foreign languages know nothing of their own.’’ By- JOHANN WOLFGANG VON GOETHE | Improvement required in punctuations, the sentence is unquoted after the fullstop. If we quote a saying than it is mandatory to mention the name of the person who said it. |
| Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text: 254 Total Number of Target Text: 272 |
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| Errors related to articles | |
| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces | |
| Spelling errors | |
| Choice of words | |
| Factual errors | |
| Choice of words and over all consistency of those words | |
| An eye for details | Lacked attention for details |
| Page layout and overall presentation | Missing |
| Profile Photo Quality | Not applicable here |
| Additional comments if any | Apart from above errors, lots of improvement in the sentence structure was done in order to bring more clarity and to make them more presentable. |
| Time taken to correct 254 words | 10 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report | 20 Minutes |
