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Assignment 1 Kumari Pallavi

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Hi, This is Pallavi, a BA student of Spanish Language in Jawaharlal Nehru university. My name is Pallavi, I am currently pursuing a bachelor degree in Spanish from Jawaharlal Nehru University. Error- very informal

Improvement in sentence structure.
 
enhance my skills in conjunction with the organizational requirements and goal.
 
enhance my skills in conjunction with the organizational requirements and goals.
 
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Transformed the word GOAL from singular to plural.
Not only out of interest but also came to know about the professional benefits of a language into an organisation which became the main reason for me to go for language courses Not only out of interest but also came to know about the professional benefits of a language into an organisation which became the main reason for me to go for language course Error – Plural word


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I am looking forward to working as a translator in the business field in near future. I am looking forward to work as a translator in the business field in near future. Error-Wrong tense form
 
Via ModlinguaI can enrich my previous experiences as through this I will be able to use my knowledge of language in work field.
 
Via Modlingua, I can enrich my previous experiences as I will be able to use my knowledge of language in work field.
 
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Added Comma and removed unwanted words like ‘through’ and ‘this’
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Tried to keep the content short and precise. Provided all the needed info.
 
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Assignment 1 Aleksandra Kneifel

ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018
 
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Originally hailing from Poland, Aleksandra has spent most of her life abroad in the Czech Republic, China, and Azerbaijan.A trilingual scholar (Polish-English-Spanish), she has recently sat her C2 exam in Spanish and is awaiting the results.Aleksandra is currently finishing her Erasmus+ mobility placement in Almería, Spain. Following this, she will return to London, where she will complete her final year at Queen Mary University and graduate with a joint-honours degree in Hispanic Studies and Drama.
She hopes that as an intern at Modlingua she will be able to gain valuable experience in the field and add to her translation portfolio. She is especially interested in translating for the stage, social media marketing and online marketing.
After finishing her undergraduate studies, she hopes to continue her academic development by pursuing an MA in Translation and Culture at University College London.
 
Originally hailing from Poland, Aleksandra has spent most of her life abroad in the Czech Republic, China, and Azerbaijan. A trilingual scholar (Polish-English-Spanish), she has recently sat her C2 exam in Spanish and is awaiting the results. Aleksandra is currently finishing her Erasmus+ mobility placement in Almería, Spain. Following this, she will return to London, where she will complete her final year at Queen Mary University and graduate with a joint-honours degree in Hispanic Studies and Drama.
She hopes that as an intern at Modlingua she will be able to gain valuable experience in the field and add to her translation portfolio. She is especially interested in translating for the stage, social media marketing and online marketing.
After finishing her undergraduate studies, she hopes to continue her academic development by pursuing an MA in Translation and Culture at University College London.
 
The original text was spaced correctly. When published on the Modlingua website, several spaces were omitted. I have put them back.
 
Although still a relatively inexperienced translator, I am taking prompt steps to rectify this, hence why I believe an internship opportunity at Modlingua is the perfect match to further my professional experience. I believe the programme will help me to gain valuable experience in the field and put myself in an advantageous position compared to other applicants. I have already begun to develop my translation portfolio, but I hope to be able to add to it through the Modlingua internship.
In February, I applied and was accepted onto the TED team, as a volunteer translator and subtitler on the online Amara platform. Since then I have been actively working pro-bono in the community, subtitling about two videos per month. The experience has given me a taste of translation work but has left me hungry for more.
I have recently completed an online course from Cardiff University entitled “Working with Translation”. The course explored the nature and practice of translation, drawing on the latest research and with input from a variety of professionals while focusing on the role of the translator, where translation takes place, and the nature of quality in translation. Through this course, I have been able to gain a better understanding of the inner workings of the industry, but it has also brought to a light a lot of questions I still have. I hope to continue answering these through my experience at Modlingua.
Despite my young age, I consider myself very driven and ambitious, and I prefer to go through life actively setting and meeting goals. After my undergraduate studies, I hope to undertake an MA in Translation and Culture at University College London.
Besides my professional interests, I enjoy sports – both actively participating and spectating. I am also a great animal lover and would love to one day volunteer my translation skills for an organization working for their well-being.
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Page layout and overall presentation good
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Additional comments if any  none
Time taken to correct 254 words 5
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report 5

 
 
 

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