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Assignment 1 Mahtab

ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018
 
Version 1 - Draft version Version 2- Corrected version Comments/ Types of errors
A big Bonjour  to everybody from Modlingua . ( linguist or not, come aboard!) Deleted Not needed
So This is our next video which deals on “ How to Bargain a better deal in the professional world. Deleted Not Needed
Remember when our parents or teachers used to hint us –“ once you go out of the classroom ,you will know the world “.. yeah, Frankly speaking language market is totally different from a language classroom.
 
 
 
Remember when our parents or teachers used to scold us and tell us,  “once you go out of the classroom, you will know the world “.. yeah, frankly speaking, language market is totally different from a language classroom.
 
Improvement in syntax and sentence structure
No gap between comma and next letter
Comma needed after Frankly speaking,
Improvement in choice of words
 
Since we  havere already equipped ourselves with classroom learning of a language , we better also equip ourselves with the basic survival skills of the cruel market . yes take that “Markets are cruel for those who lack skills.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Since we have already equipped ourselves with classroom learning of a language, we better equip ourselves with the basic survival skills of the professional market where competition plays its own role. Many times they assume cruel role because of cut-throat competition and human desire to acquire and amass wealth in excess. Yes, please note, “markets are more cruel for those who lack skills'.
 
Double space after we. Extra "re"  after have
Extra space after language and before comma
Extra space after market
For Yes, Y need to be in Capital letter
Lack of closing quotation mark
 
So in this video  our Focus is to build upon  certain survival skills among the interns ,which in turn will strengthen their  professional approach in language oriented work areas and dimensions.
The idea is to Understand the basic requirements of a skill ,acquire it and further  develop those skills to bring  professionalism and assurance in translation and interpretation market.
So in this internship program, our focus is to build on certain survival skills among the interns so that when they start interacting with the professional world, they are able to cope up well and slowly build on their own strengths in the profession and slowly diversify into a power center of knowledge and skills not only in languages but also in managerial and other related areas.  Extra space between two words video and focus. Same issue between upon and certain - extra space after upon.
No comma needed after interns
Last sentence syntax improvement
Check red marked text error there too
Missing comma after video
Decapitalizing “U”
 
Of course as said above .We are not discussing about the academic or technical requirements of texts translations or interpretations,because that was a curriculum of  academy and class learning, here instead we discuss the market approach and management of grievances and problems that we generally face when we set out to work in a language oriented field especially if we talk about  translation and interpretations. Of course, as said already, we are not discussing the academic or technical requirements of translation of texts that we have already covered in our academic curriculum. Here we are discussing the market approach and management of grievances and professional problems that we generally face while at work. Comma needed after Of course,
 
No space required before full stop.
Improvement in sentence structure
Check the red part
Apart from all these ,we are bent on empowering  our interns with clientele wisdom and business  acumen! Say for example … Apart from all these, we feel highly motivated to share our knowledge and experience with the interns and help them in understanding the expectations of the clients and how to fulfil their requirements or how to make out if the client is trustworthy? Or how to filter out the bad or fake clients? etc. Check the space
Check the choice of words
Red part does not give clarity, hence improvement in the syntax done.
 

 
 

Error Analysis
Total Number of Source Text: 254
Total Number of Target Text: 272
Errors related to articles  
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces  
 
Spelling errors  
Choice of words  
Factual errors  
Choice of words and over all consistency of those words  
An eye for details Lacked attention for details
Page layout and overall presentation Missing
Profile Photo Quality Not applicable here
Additional comments if any Apart from above errors, lots of improvement in the sentence structure was done in order to bring more clarity and coherence
Time taken to correct 254 words 15 Minutes
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report 15 Minutes

 

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Assignment1 Roshni

ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018
 PROFILE
Version 1 - Draft version
Version 2- Corrected version
Comments/ Types of errors
I am Roshni Mishra.I am pursuing diploma in French from Jesus and Mary College, Delhi University. In past , I have done internship in marketing at Atul Enterprises, Nestle India Limited.
I am Roshni Mishra. I am pursuing diploma in French from Jesus and Mary College, Delhi University. In past, I have done internship in marketing at Atul Enterprises, Nestle India Limited. No gap after fullstop. No need of space before comma
I have also been a tutor for French at Miskimp (a social venture project which is helping kids to get free training, education and mentoring). 
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Apart from this, I have been a freelance content writer. I have keen interest in political science and which helped me to pursue B.A (H) political science, Delhi University.     Apart from this, I have been a freelance content writer. I have a keen interest in political science and which helped me to pursue B.A (H) political science, Delhi University. 
Syntax error
Throughout my high school years I studied      C++ language during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject. Throughout my high school years, I      studied C++ language during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject
Check the comma
In my free time, I love reading books, Quora and surfing web.
CAREER GOALS
In my free time, I love reading books, Quora and surfing the web.
Imrovement in the syntax error
I have keen interest in learning a foreign language because it not only adds a skill in you but also makes you confident, fluent and smarter. It also enhances your career opportunities. I am preparing to score well in DELF B1. My short term goal is to pursue masters in French from Jawaharlal Nehru University, New Delhi.
Learning language is a beautiful journey and teaching a language is even prettier. I want to do PHD in French from Foreing University in future as I love teaching and want to be a professor in an Indian university. I believe that in India, we still give importance to 2 languages mostly; I want people to realize and see that there is a lot of scope in future by learning foreign language courses. 
I have also been associated with social causes and will continue teaching kids and mentoring them in French. I have a keen interest in learning a foreign language because it not only adds a skill to you but also makes you confident, fluent and smarter. It also enhances your career opportunities. I am preparing to score well in DELF B1. My short- term goal is to pursue masters in French from Jawaharlal Nehru University, New Delhi.
Learning language is a beautiful            journey and teaching a language is even prettier. I want to do PhD in French from Foreing University in future as I love teaching and want to be a professor at Indian university. I believe that in India, we still give importance to 2 languages mostly; I want people to realize and see that there ia a lot of scope in future by learning foreign language courses. I have also been associated with social causes and will continue teaching kids and mentor them in French. Improvement in the syntax error. Check the hyphen. Spelling mistakes
Error Analysis
Total Number of Source Text: 267
Total Number of Target Text: 245
Errors related to text: 10
Error related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces: 4
Omissions: 3
Choice of words: 2
Factual errors: 1
Choice of words and overall consistency of those words: 1
An eye for details: Lacked attention for details
Page layout and overall presentation: Missing
 Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: 30 minutes
 

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