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Assignment 1 Vatya

ERROR ANALYSIS (Professional profile)
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 A student of Jawaharlal Nehru University, pursuing her bachelor’s in Spanish. I have been teaching Spanish to young school kids since last year and have completed my second year, only this month. I believe in healthy contribution to the organization with a positive approach, confidence, and willingness to learn. I am a theatre and language enthusiast and like to read. I have acquired knowledge about the language, literature and cultural studies of Spanish and wish to work closely in my field.
I am a student of Jawaharlal Nehru University.
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pursuing my bachelor's in Spanish.
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ERROR ANALYSIS (Career goals)

When I began my college career, I knew I wanted to pursue a major that would provide me with a useful skill set: something that would enable me to grow as an individual, to challenge myself, and ultimately to better understand the world around me. This is why I have chosen to study Spanish Language and Culture, a major that focuses on the understanding and interpretation of the language and the society. I was intrigued to see the diversity of the relevance of foreign language in a different notion: an artistic, rather than monetary ideal. Through my love of reading and writing in my own language, my enjoyment of doing theatre and my two years so far studying Spanish, I have come to appreciate the artistic reality of language.

I have opted for Portuguese as my elective subject as I have learned that my interest in knowing a language that is similar to any major could be of  enormous benefit in the working world.

Through this internship, I want to achieve the goal of gaining practical and marketable skill of a foreign language, which I can utilize in any sphere of employment.

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I have opted for Portuguese as my elective subject as I have learned that my interest in knowing more languages can yield enormous benefit in the professional world. 
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Error Analysis -:
Total Number of Source Text: 273
Total Number of Target Text: 265
Errors related to articles: 1
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces: 0
Omissions: 1
Spelling errors : 0
Choice of words: 1
Factual errors: 0
An eye for details: No lack of attention for details
Profile Photo Quality: A clear profile picture at 250x250 pixel size.
Additional comments: Errors were omitted.
Time  taken to correct 639 words: 15 Minutes (approximately)
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: 25 Minutes

Assignment 1 Madhu Shree

ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018
BRIEF PROFILE
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I moved to Indira Gandhi National Tribal University (Central University), Amarkantak, Madhya Pradesh to further my higher degree both in under-graduate and post-graduate  studies I moved to Indira Gandhi National Tribal University (Central University), Amarkantak, Madhya Pradesh to further my higher degree both in undergraduate and post-graduate studies. Punctuation space in “undergraduate”
During the graduation English language being a compulsory subject I evinced greater interest in being with English language. well conversant During the graduation English language is a compulsory subject I evinced greater interest in being well conversant with English language. Improvement in syntax and sentence structure
I tried to be at my best in English language and most of the time on seminars and symposiums , I tried to be at my best in English language and most of the time on seminars and symposiums, Comma after “symposiums”
This was solely to ponder to my inherent propensity for English language. This was only for pondering to my inherent propensity for English language. Improvement in syntax and sentence structure
As a part of this I played an active role in the University in various dramas, As a part of this, I played an active role in the University in various dramas, Comma after “this”
In recognition of my excellent performance as the student in the examinations I was awarded gold medal in Political Science (Hons.) during the year 2013-16. In recognition of my excellent performance as the student in the examinations, I was awarded gold medal in Political Science (Hons.) during the year 2013-16. Comma after “examinations”
Also I expect the repetition of this once the result of post graduation comes out for the session 2016-2018. Also, I expect the repetition of this once the result of post-graduation comes out for the session 2016-2018. Comma after “Also”
A student of Political Science I developed greater interest in International Relations A student of Political Science I developed a greater interests in International Relations Article “a” is missing after “developed” and before “greater”
In order to reach the set goal I need to be acquainted with my own limitations to travel into the unknown realms of knowledge. In order to reach the set goal, I need to be acquainted with my own limitations to travel into the unknown realms of knowledge. Comma after “goal”
For this I need to be trained specific skills and technologies, For this, I need to be trained specific skills and technologies, Punctuation space , comma after “this”
     
Career Goals
Instead to keep myself confined to classroom  knowledge and specific books, Instead, to keep myself confined to classroom knowledge and specific books, Punctuation space, comma after “Instead”
I always take it a pleasure and a dynamic aspect of my life to be acquainted with my own limitations and come back with renewed strength and vigor to grapple with the new challenges and move forward. I always take it a pleasure and a dynamic aspect of my life to be acquainted with my own limitations and come back with renewed strength and vigor to grapple with the new challenges and move forward. Spelling mistake “Vigour” written as Vigor
Brief Profile and Career Goals were exchanged.
Error Analysis
Total number of source text:  515
Total number of target text: 515
Error related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces 8
Choice of words 2
Spelling error 1
Grammatical mistake 1
Profile photo Not appropriate
Page layout and overall presentation missing
   

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