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Assignment 1 Garima Dhingra

                                                               Error Analysis Report
Version 1 - Draft version Version 2- Corrected version Comments/ Types of errors
BRIEF
I am a language expert based in New Delhi. I have all the usual interests of today's generation. I love books, food, movies, TV shows, travelling, photography, poetry, sketching and talking about all of this on social media. With a keen interest in Art, Culture, Cinema, History and Positive Psychology, I am inclined towards all sorts of creative pursuits and am always eager to learn new skills.
 		 BRIEF
I am a language expert based in New Delhi. I have all the usual interests of today's generation. I love books, food, movies, TV shows, travelling, photography, poetry, sketching and talking about all of this on social media. With a keen interest in Art, Culture, Cinema, History and Positive Psychology, I am inclined towards all sorts of creative pursuits and am always eager to learn new skills.
 		  
 
 
 
 
No Error
As an introvert child, some of my happiest moments were spent buying and reading novels. Having acquired a passion for languages at an early age, I picked English Literature for graduation, which gave me tremendous exposure to the life and works of some of the best thinkers and artists in history. I have always maintained that it was the best decision of my life. The course bombarded me with an immense range of new ideas from every corner of the world, radically transforming my perception and outlook. The ways in which it changed my personality was phenomenal. I went from being an academically excellent but meek girl to an outspoken, aware and confident woman who had mastered two of the most important skills of our times- the ability to question everything and the art of unlearning and relearning.
                                                               		 As an introvert child, some of my happiest moments were spent buying and reading novels. Having acquired a passion for languages at an early age, I picked English Literature for graduation, which gave me tremendous exposure to the life and works of some of the best thinkers and artists in history. I have always maintained that it was the best decision of my life. The course bombarded me with an immense range of new ideas from every corner of the world, radically transforming my perception and outlook. The ways in which it changed my personality was phenomenal. I went from being an academically excellent but meek girl to an outspoken, aware and confident woman who had mastered two of the most important skills of our times- the ability to question everything and the art of unlearning and relearning.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
No Error
Over the course of the next few years, I achieved the Superior Level C1 in French amidst the multicultural environment of Alliance Française De Delhi, followed by an Advanced Diploma in French from St. Stephen’s College.
Professionally, I have tutored students, taught French at a school, done an intense 3 month editorial internship with a Media house and worked on various translation and content writing projects as a freelancer. I have enjoyed being part of each of these roles.
 		 Over the course of the next few years, I achieved the Superior Level C1 in French amidst the multicultural environment of Alliance Française De Delhi, followed by an Advanced Diploma in French from St. Stephen’s College.
Professionally, I have tutored students, taught French at a school, done an intense 3-month editorial internship with a Media house and worked on various translation and content writing projects as a freelancer. I have enjoyed being part of each of these roles.		 Hyphen was missing
CAREER GOALS
My interests and knowledge include but are not limited to the linguistic field. I constantly seek to diversify my talents and explore new roles and potential leadership opportunities while embracing larger challenges. I aim to link my multilingual expertise with other sectors like Media, Tourism, International Relations, etc. While working at an international organisation would be a promising prospect, I also have a keen desire to work with NGOs and on environment conservation projects.
 		 Career Goals
My interests and knowledge include but are not limited to the linguistic field. I constantly seek to diversify my talents and explore new roles and potential leadership opportunities while embracing larger challenges. I aim to link my multilingual expertise with other sectors like Media, Tourism, International Relations, etc. While working at an international organisation would be a promising prospect, I also have a keen desire to work with NGOs and on environmental conservation projects.
 		  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Wrong terminology /spelling used
We often hear people stressing on the importance of having clearly defined career goals and paths in life. I have, what I like to call, an interesting mix of qualifications, interests and hobbies, coupled with an insane curiosity, dedication to self-improvement and a positive approach towards living a good life. Time is too short to do just one thing, stay in one place or work just one job. Also, I firmly believe that purpose is more important than goals. I am on the way to find mine and to discover more and more on the journey. I am inspired by Christopher Morley’s mantra: “There is only one real success, and that is to be able to live life on your terms, your own way.’’
 		 We often hear people stressing the importance of having clearly defined career goals and paths in life. I have, what I like to call, an interesting mix of qualifications, interests and hobbies, coupled with an insane curiosity, dedication to self-improvement and a positive approach towards living a good life. Time is too short to do just one thing, stay in one place or work just one job. Also, I firmly believe that purpose is more important than goals. I am on the way to find mine and to discover more and more on the journey. I am inspired by Christopher Morley’s mantra: “There is only one real success, and that is to be able to live life on your terms, your own way.’’
 		 Grammatical Error
Correct phrase is stressing + article + noun
“On” has to be omitted
I welcome the opportunity to learn about Translation business and allied skills with Modlingua’s Summer Internship program and am thrilled in anticipation of all the new things these next 2 months would bring up.
 		 I welcome the opportunity to learn about Translation business and allied skills with Modlingua’s Summer Internship program and am thrilled in anticipation of all the new things these next 2 months would bring up.  
 
No Error
     

 
 

Error Analysis
 
Total Number of Source Text: 519
Total Number of Target Text: 518
 
Errors related to articles 0
 
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces 1
 
Omissions
0
 
Spelling errors
1
 
Choice of words
1
 
Factual errors
0
 
Choice of words and overall consistency of those words
 0

 
An eye for details Above-average
Page layout and overall presentation
Neat
 
Profile Photo Quality  
Photo size was not correct.
 
Additional comments if any
None
 
Time taken to correct 519 words: 
20 Minutes
 
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report:  35 Minutes
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Assignment 1 Deepasri

 

Version 1 - Draft version Version 2- Corrected version Corrected version Comments/ Types of errors
     
I am a student of communication             I am a student of communication              
from Kolkata. Right from choosing  from Kolkata. Right from choosing   
Mass Communication as my  Mass Communication as my   
graduation and post graduation  graduation and post graduation   
subject under the University of  subject under the University of   
Calcutta, to taking up a lateral Spanish Calcutta, to taking up a lateral Spanish  
 language course from Ramakrishna  language course from Ramakrishna  
 Mission and Indo Hispanic Language   Mission and Indo Hispanic Language   
academy, I have been trying to broaden  academy, I have been trying to broaden   
my scope in the field of communication.  my scope in the field of communication.   
     
     
I started out as a freelancer in television  I started out as a freelancer in television  Change in sentence structure
productions and then moved on to working  productions and then moved on to working   
for DataCore Systems as a for DataCore Systems as a  
 Spanish translator in an ad monitoring   Spanish translator in an ad monitoring   
process. Presently I work at Wipro  process. Presently I am working at Wipro   
Limited as a Spanish Language resource. Limited as a Spanish Language resource.  
     
     
I have a Dele B1 certification and  I have a Dele B1 certification and   
am preparing for higher levels to  am preparing for higher levels to   
lay a strong foundation to go forward  lay a strong foundation, to go forward  comma needed
in the field of Translation and  in the field of Translation and   
Interpretation. Currently, I am an  Interpretation. Currently, I am an   
intern at Modlingua and hope to gain an  intern at Modlingua and hope to gain an   
experience about the operational  experience about the operational   
structure of the field  structure of the field   
of Translation and Interpretation. of Translation and Interpretation.  
     
     
Career Goals    
     
As far as identifyinggoals go  I  As far as identifying goals go, I  comma needed
wouldn’t say I am there  wouldn’t say I am there   
yet. I have always been  yet. I have always been   
interested in a diverse range  interested in a diverse range   
of activities such as sports,  of activities such as sports,   
dancing, movies and  dancing, movies and   
reading; and limiting myself  reading; and limiting myself   
to some specific milestones to some specific milestones  
does not fit well with me.  does not fit well with me.   
     
     
As a student of communication,  As a student of communication,  comma needed
after finishing graduation and  after finishing graduation and   
primary Spanish education  primary Spanish education,  
I had dreamed of using  I had dreamed of using   
language as a resource within  language as a resource within   
my range of capabilities and to  my range of capabilities and to   
keep updating that range keep updating that range  
 with each passing step.  with each passing step.  
     
     
What started out as a hobby, What started out as a hobby,  
been talked into by peers,  been talked into by peers,   
turned into a passion that  turned into a passion that   
instilled an urge to go deeper into  instilled an urge to go deeper into   
the subject. I have been  the subject. I have been   
working as a Spanish language  working as a Spanish language   
resource for more than  resource for more than   
two years.  two years.   
     
Now I am looking forward to  Now I am looking forward to   
my internship at Modlingua  my internship at Modlingua   
which will hopefully which will hopefully  
 open gateways of knowledge  open gateways of knowledge  
 and awareness regarding the   and awareness regarding the   
field of translation and interpretation,  field of translation and interpretation,   
and its application in tertiary  and its application in tertiary   
fields such as online marketing,  fields such as online marketing,   
social media marketing, branding and  social media marketing, branding and   
market research, which are beyond  market research, which are beyond   
regular classroom curriculum. regular classroom curriculum.  
     
     
I have a desire to venture into new  I have a desire to venture into new  Word substitution
possibilities and experience work  possibilities and experience work   
modules which I have not faced before. modules which I have not faced before. area substituted by field
 Translation and Interpretation is a vast  Translation and Interpretation is a vast  
 area. It changes with the domain   field. It changes with the domain   
it is applied in. I aspire to look around this  it is applied in. I aspire to look around this   
vastness and gather as much as possible. vastness and gather as much as possible.  
 My Career goal is to not reach a specific   My career goal is to not reach a specific  Case type error
point but to make a journey which would  point but to make a journey which would   
inspire me to take up difficult challenges  inspire me to take up difficult challenges   
and grow with every step so that each day and grow with every step so that each day  
 I can improve on what I had the day before.  I can improve on what I had the day before.                                                   




 

Error Analysis
Total Number of Source Text: 404
Total Number of Target Text: 405
Errors related to articles 0
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces, case type                                                  4
Omissions 0
Spelling errors 0
Choice of words 1
Choice of words and overall consistency of those words 1
Sentence structure change 1


Time taken to correct 404 words: 

60 Minutes
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report:  30 Minutes

 









 

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