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Assignment 1 Esraa-Rubric

Error Analysis
Total Number of Source Text:259
Errors related to articles 0
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces 0
Omissions 0
Spelling errors 1
Choice of words 2
Factual errors 1
Choice of words and over all consistency of those words  2
An eye for details  Attention for details
Profile Photo Quality  Not applicable here
Additional comments if any Apart from above errors, lots of improvement in the sentence structure was done in order to bring more clarity and coherence 
Time taken to correct 259 words 20 Minutes 
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report  20 Minutes 
 
Draft version Corrected version Types of errors
I earned my Bachelor’s degree in Oriental languages from the faculty of arts, Cairo University.  Deleted Not needed
I studied literature and languages of Persian and Turkish Deleted Not needed
Translation is one of my favourite passions especially in media, research and scientific fields, so I joined in Scientific Research program with Egypt Scholars Inc to learning about it and improve my skills. Translation is one of my favorite passions especially in media, research and scientific fields, so I joined in Scientific Research program with Egypt Scholars Inc to learning about it and improve my skills. Check the spelling of favorite 
Also, I am a scientific translator in Real Science online Magazine, where I translate many articles in different fields such as psychology, Sociology, Biology and Linguistics from English to Arabic. Also, I am a scientific translator in Real Science online Magazine, which I translate many articles in different fields such as psychology, Sociology, Biology and Linguistics from English to Arabic. Check the choice of word which
Also, I volunteer in "Her Story" campaign, which sponsored by Wikipedia and the United Nations Women by translating from English to Arabic. Deleted Not needed
I am interested also in media. I joined a "What is news" certificate online course from Michigan State University to learning how to create and make good news and how to deliver it to the right audience. I interested also in media. I joined a "What is news" certificate online course from Michigan State University to learning how to create and make good news and how to deliver it to the right audience. Improvement sentence syntax delete verb "am"
I am a self-motivated person and believe that everyone should develop new skill Deleted Not needed
For me, every new language you learn means that you become a new person with a different perspective. Deleted Not needed
Each new language means new countries you can go to, and means more job opportunities you can get. Deleted Not needed
And a lot of closed doors, which were impossible for you to enter, become opened for you. Deleted Not needed
My dream is to work in a dynamic environment where people from different nationalities to enrich my skill. My dream is working in a dynamic environment where people from different nationalities to enrich my skill. Improvement sentence syntax
I know Persian (oral and written), English, Turkish (basic written) and Arabic. Deleted Not needed
 
 

Assignment 1 Princi-rubric

Original text Corrected version Errors
 
My name is Princi from India. I am a student of Spanish (H) in the University of Delhi, Department of Germanic and Romance studies. I love learning new languages and exploring cultures and traditions of different countries. I am extremely hardworking who has a desire to learn new skills.
 
My name is Princi from India. I am a student of Spanish (H) in the University of Delhi, Department of Germanic and Romance studies. I love learning new languages and exploring cultures and traditions of different countries. I am very hardworking who has a desire to learn new skills.
 
Extremely replaced by: very
 
My hobbies include exploring different cultures, interact with people, reading books on social issues, history etc. I also love to listen Spanish music and I read Spanish newspaper to expand my vocabulary.
 
My hobbies include exploring different cultures, interact with people, reading books on social issues, history etc. I also love to listen Spanish music and, I read Spanish newspaper to expand my vocabulary Need of comma
 
I love translating different types of articles and many things alike are my main passion and because of that, that I have come to Modlingua in the search for knowledge and the necessary experience to expand myself professionally. Here at Modlingua, I would like to develop more on my translation and interpretation skills.  
 
I love translating different types of articles and many things alike are my main passion and because of that, I have come to Modlingua in the search for knowledge and   necessary experience to expand myself professionally. Here at Modlingua, I would like to develop more on my translation and interpretation skills.  
 
Repetition of that
Unnecessary use of the
 
I always wanted to do something different so, after finishing my schooling immediately I have chosen a foreign language as my Honours subject in my graduation and it was my first step towards my goal.
 
I always wanted to do something different so, after finishing my schooling immediately, I chose a foreign language as my Honours subject in my graduation and it was my first step towards my goal.
 
Use of comma
syntax
 
Learning Spanish was the best decision of my life, after learning Spanish I get to know about my passion for languages. Along with learning a foreign language you also learn many more things like cultures, traditions and many more.  After completing graduation I am planning to do Post graduation in Spanish as well because I love Spanish literature and translating them as well. My goal is to become a Spanish translator and professor in a reputed University. Learning Spanish was the best decision of my life, after learning Spanish, I get to know about my passion for languages. Along with learning a foreign language you also learn many more things like cultures, traditions and many more.  After completing graduation, I am planning to do Post graduation in Spanish as well because, I love Spanish literature and translating them as well. My goal is to become a Spanish translator and professor in a reputed University Use of comma
 
I hope at the end of this internship I would definitely be able to find a better and upgraded version of myself with imparted knowledge and guidance of the professionals.
 
I hope at the end of this internship, I would definitely be able to find a better and upgraded version of myself with imparted knowledge and guidance of the professionals.
 
Use of comma

 

Error Analysis
Total Number of Source Text: 279
Total Number of Target Text: 270
Errors related to articles 1
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces 5
Omissions 1
Spelling errors 0
Choice of words 1
Choice of words and overall consistency of those words 1
   
Time taken to correct 279 words:  20 Minutes
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report:  30 Minutes

 
 

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