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Join WhatsApp ChannelAssignment1 Roshni Mishra
ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018
PROFILE
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Version 2- Corrected version
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I am Roshni Mishra.I am pursuing diploma in French from Jesus and Mary College, Delhi University. In past , I have done internship in marketing at Atul Enterprises, Nestle India Limited.
I am Roshni Mishra. I am pursuing diploma in French from Jesus and Mary College, Delhi University. In past, I have done internship in marketing at Atul Enterprises, Nestle India Limited. No gap after fullstop. No need of space before comma
I have also been a tutor for French at Miskimp (a social venture project which is helping kids to get free training, education and mentoring).
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Apart from this, I have been a freelance content writer. I have keen interest in political science and which helped me to pursue B.A (H) political science, Delhi University. Apart from this, I have been a freelance content writer. I have a keen interest in political science and which helped me to pursue B.A (H) political science, Delhi University.
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Throughout my high school years I studied C++ language during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject. Throughout my high school years, I studied C++ language during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject
Check the comma
In my free time, I love reading books, Quora and surfing web.
CAREER GOALS
In my free time, I love reading books, Quora and surfing the web.
Imrovement in the syntax error
I have keen interest in learning a foreign language because it not only adds a skill in you but also makes you confident, fluent and smarter. It also enhances your career opportunities. I am preparing to score well in DELF B1. My short term goal is to pursue masters in French from Jawaharlal Nehru University, New Delhi.
Learning language is a beautiful journey and teaching a language is even prettier. I want to do PHD in French from Foreing University in future as I love teaching and want to be a professor in an Indian university. I believe that in India, we still give importance to 2 languages mostly; I want people to realize and see that there is a lot of scope in future by learning foreign language courses.
I have also been associated with social causes and will continue teaching kids and mentoring them in French. I have a keen interest in learning a foreign language because it not only adds a skill to you but also makes you confident, fluent and smarter. It also enhances your career opportunities. I am preparing to score well in DELF B1. My short- term goal is to pursue masters in French from Jawaharlal Nehru University, New Delhi.
Learning language is a beautiful journey and teaching a language is even prettier. I want to do PhD in French from Foreing University in future as I love teaching and want to be a professor at Indian university. I believe that in India, we still give importance to 2 languages mostly; I want people to realize and see that there ia a lot of scope in future by learning foreign language courses. I have also been associated with social causes and will continue teaching kids and mentor them in French. Improvement in the syntax error. Check the hyphen. Spelling mistakes
Error Analysis
Errors related to text 10
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: 30 Minutes
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Assignment 1 Simona
ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018
| Version 1 - Draft version | Version 2 – Corrected version | Comments/ Types of errors |
| Hello! I am Simona Tessa. Since 2011, I have been living in Rome. | Since 2011, I have lived in Rome. | Check the verb. |
| In this university, I have got the possibility to learn what I love, languages and their culture, in particular with translation and interpreting. | I have had Languages for translation and interpreting and their culture. |
Check the verb. Improvement in sentence structure. |
| I would like to continue my studies with languages, in particular with Chinese and English as well as I would like to sign up for a postgraduate course in Organisation and Marketing for Business Communication. | Therefore | Improvement in sentence structure. |
| I would like to improve in different fields such as Marketing and Sales, Market Research, Entrepreneurship and terminology in marketing/management. | I would like to improve myself Marketing/Management |
Check the choice of words Capital letter M for Marketing and Manangement |
| For this reason, this year in March | Therefore, this year in March | Repeating word Improvement in syntax and sentence structure |
| Today, I am a customer care assistant and during this year in my job, I have learnt to collaborate in a teamwork. | Years | Add the ‘s’ |
| Therefore, I have the capacity to do the work that is entrusted to me in a good way. | Deleted | It is not clear |
| In particular, the sector I would like to improve is the translation in English and Chinese languages as well as learning more word in marketing and entrepreneurship fields. | Marketing and Entrepreneurship | Capital letter M and E for Marketing and Entrepreneurship |
| This kind of work helps me to improve my capacity in the field that I really like such as speaking and translation. | Deleted | Not needed |
| In my future, I would become a managing director, especially in marketing and business fields. | Managing Director Marketing and Business fields |
Capital letter |
| At the end of this year, I would like to continue my academic studies in management and business communication to become a director in communication with enterprises or something which is similar to this kind of job. | Academic Management and Business Communication Communication with Enterprises |
Capital letter |
Error Analysis
| Total Number of Source Text: 33 Total Number of Target Text: 91 |
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| Errors related to articles | 0 |
| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces | 0 |
| Omissions | 4 |
| Spelling errors | 1 |
| Choice of words | 4 |
| Factual errors | 2 |
| Choice of words and overall consistency of those words | 1 |
| An eye for details | Lacked attention for details and words. |
| Page layout and overall presentation | Correct |
| Profile Photo Quality | Not applicable here. |
| Additional comments if any | Sometimes repetitive in explaning a thought. |
| Time taken to correct: | 45 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: | 15 Minutes |
