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Assignment 1 Swastika

Version 1-Draft version Corrected version Comments/types of errors  I have 5-7 years of French learning behind me and have obtained an A1 DELF degree from Alliance Francaise. 7 years of French learning with me   Being precise .The exact number has been  mentioned  instead of an approximation.   . I play the synthesizer too and have performed during various cultural events And have been given the opportunity to perform at various cultural events.   Better sentence construction for added clarity.   risk and initiatives. I presently know English, Hindi, French, Bengali and Portuguese basics.  Risks and initiatives have a command over English, Hindi, French Bengali and Portuguese     Plurals. Addition of commas and spaces between the languages     with it a revolution of a new culture. Multilingual in the process of  Revelation Multilinguals     Appropriate vocabulary has been added.Plurality of word was missing hence corrected. As for me, language learning is an ever-growing asset in the current scenario. “Language learning” or learning a language   Better sentence construction has been made for enhanced coherency. . I will explain this my own personal experience. Deleted   Not required ‘Hindi’ and ‘English’ Hindi and English   Inverted commas have been subtracted as not required. Multilingual can see their own culture from a new perspective and are able to compare, contrast cultures Multiliguals   The plurality of the word was missing. Being an undergraduate student but with a considerable knowledge of the subject am currently teaching a 6 yr old UK based girl French.   Being an undergraduate student but with a considerable knowledge of the subject ,I am currently teaching a 6 yr old UK based girl French.   Subject was missing and hence added for coherence.Proper spacing and commas have been included. , I had been given the opportunity to attend presidential summit during the visit of  I was given the opportunity to attend a/the presidential summit.   Better sentence construction. with full enthusiasm and utmost dedication and fulfil my responsibilities Fulfill my responsibilities Spelling mistake rectified.

Asignment 1 Shatakshi Bhargava

Analysis of errors and omissions in content writing

Professional Profile
 

Version 1- Draft Version Version 2- Corrected Version Comments/ Types of errors
I am a student pursuing B.A.(Hons.) French, from Jawaharlal Nehru University. I am currently in my second year however, I have been studying and speaking French for the last ten years.
 
Besides French, I am fluent in Hindi, English and basics of Hebrew (translating from print to cursive form and vice-versa).
 
I love learning new languages and would wish to learn many more languages in the future, such as Greek, Turkish, Arabic and Korean.
 
Apart from my interest in languages, I am extremely fond of music. I have been training in Hindustani Vocals for the past 11 years and have successfully attempted and passed 5 out of 8 levels. Furthermore, I can also play the harmonium, guitar and keyboards, although the harmonium is my primary instrument.
 
At home, I indulge myself in some late night baking, which helps me with some peace of mind.
 
In the outside world, I am an extrovert who loves to interact with people and make new friends.
 
 

I am a student pursuing B.A.(Hons.) French, from Jawaharlal Nehru University. I am currently in my second year, however, I have been studying and speaking French for the last ten years.
 
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Comma needed after year,
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Error Analysis
Total Number of Source Text - 162
Total Number of Target Text - 36
Errors related to articles - 0
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces - 1
Omissions - 0
Spelling errors - 0   
Choice of words - 0
Factual errors - 0
Choice of words and overall consistency of those words - 0
An eye for details - lacked attention for details
Page layout and overall presentation - present
Profile photo quality – 292 x 351
Additional comments if any - no comments
Time taken to correct 162 words - 10 minutes
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report - 10 minutes


Career Goals
 

Version 1 – Draft Version Version 2 – Corrected Version Comments/ Types of errors
 
After completing my Graduation in French, I wish to continue with my academics and pursue a
PhD in French. I want to fund my future education with earnings and savings of my own.
 
I wish to be a translator/ interpreter or work in the French Embassy or a reputed organization where I will give my best.
 
I am extremely interested in the summer internship programme offered by your organization. I believe that it will provide me with invaluable learning and experience.
 
It will give me a grounded experience of what my studies might look like in a work environment. It will give me an opportunity to meet different people with diverse leadership styles.
 
This internship would help me manage my time more efficiently. It would also help me to develop my skills and build a strong network of contacts.
 
I am a hardworking child and would give my best if I get an opportunity to work with your organization.
 
I believe that my skills and knowledge of languages and my determination towards
work will prove to be an asset to your organization during my internship.
 
I promise to work with
full enthusiasm and utmost dedication and fulfil all my responsibilities.
 
 
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 I wish to be a translator/ interpreter or work in the French Embassy or a reputed organization where I will give my best.
 
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 I am very hardworking and would give my best if I get an opportunity to work with your organization.
 
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 No gap between ‘/ ‘and interpreter
 
 
 
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Choice of words
 
 
 
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Error Analysis
Total Number of Source Text - 200                  
Total Number of Target Text - 48
Errors related to articles - 0
Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs, spaces - 1
Omissions - 0
Spelling errors - 0
Choice of words - 1
Factual errors - 0
Choice of words and overall consistency of those words - 1
An eye for details - lacked attention for details
Page layout and overall presentation - present
Profile photo quality – 292 x 351
Additional comments if any - no comments
Time taken to correct 200 words - 15 minutes
Time taken to prepare this evaluation report - 15 minutes



 

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